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for Forever, My Puppy

by serialcabbit78

person Demonix
schedule August 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*kicks herself in he ass*
i knew i should have checked this sooner.
oh well.
i loved this story! it was very kawaii. and a couple of nice twists! i will be sure to read the sequel!
well i gotsta git! asta!!
person Lady Elfskye
schedule August 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wonderful story! cant wait till the sequel!!

person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule August 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YD: What a relief that Joey's dad was clean.
DD: Yeah!
YD: Can't wait for the sequel!!
person Luminairie
schedule August 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This has got to be my all time favorite fanfic! please continue, never let it end!
person Iruka
schedule August 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely loved every word of this story. I'm a big Seto x Joey fan and this had to be one of the best -- if not the best fic I've read with the two of them. It was beautifullly written. The intimate parts weren't overly detailed or vulgar (although sometimes I, myself, do enjoy hardcore). I can honestly say that I look forward to reading more of your work and of course the rest of this wonderful story.

Iruka
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule August 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YD: Good stuff!
DD: Are you going to end it there?
person KC
schedule August 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
man! Why the heck did u stop it right there? great, now we have to wait for the next chapter to come on next week, next month or in two weeks!!! COME ON!!! ::Aibou!:: *jumps* great, your finally here now aren't u? ::What are u talking about? I've been here!:: Ignoring me though Yami. ::What? I am not ignoring u!!!:: Then where were u last time i've read the last chapter? ::well, you see, I was...:: Couldn't answer huh? ::Aibou?:: What!? ::Your review?:: *Sighed* Very well, CONTINUE TO UPDATE PLEASE!!!
person yaoi_nut
schedule August 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwwwww. They're going to be married. It's so sweet. Will there be the marriage in later chapters? Oh please say yes. Doesn't matter if it's a little off track from the story
person yaoi_nut
schedule August 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
;_; Poor Joey and Serenity. How could that basterd do that to their mother! I'M GLAD HE'S DEAD! HE DIDN'T DESERVE TO LIVE! Please continue!
person Mystical Cabbit
schedule August 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow!