rate_review Reviews

To say the least, Every time I reread my own story here... it' brings tears to my eyes..I wrote something passionate and sweet

I don't know if your aware of this by any kind of sexul contacted, oral or other wize is still rape if forced on some one.

WOW, FUCKING WOW!

I LOVE PHANTOM ON THE OPERA! I was planning on reading the rest of the fic before I reviewed and then read your sequal but I thought I just had to tell you that Chapter 13 was my FAVORITE chapter in any fic I've ever seen. Not just because of the song BUT SETO PROPOSED TO JOEY. It's something I've wanted to see written for a long time and here it is! I'll review again after I finish this fic then I'll read your sequal.

Ja.

Oh the ending to your fic is both sad and sweet! I absolutely loved it! Poor Joey and Serenity. I'm glad they have Seto. You work really has emotion in it, I like that. It makes better fics then ones with no plot, or a plot without feelings behind it. I've only read a few fics that actually made me sad, angry, or happy as separate emotions. I fond my mood changing as the story went along. Toward begibeginning at the pool party I laughed, when Joey found out all the things his dad had done my eyes teared up for him, and when his dad wanted him back I got mad.

One thing I really loved was the ring Seto osedosed to Joey with. Two dragons, one with a red eye and one with a blue. Symbolism isn't something you see in every fic and this kind of symbo is is the best kind. I thought it was the perfect symbol of their love. Anyway, I loved the ring. I also like the fact that Joey had dreams of a white dragon protecting him. That was great too. And the locket Serenity gave him for his birthday was a cute idea too. Your ideas are very original and appropriate.

I find myself unable to criticize "Forever My Puppy" in anyway. You are a very talented writer and I look forward to reading the sequel you've come out with. Please keep writing, your work is beautiful.

Hey no fair you left me hanggin come on this is too sweet I can't wait until I see Joey&Seto get married they are so cute please continue It's just so cute I LOVE IT so don't make me wait to much PLEASE!!!!!! ^_^

I was nice but sad!

I liked this fic, I only wished that poor Joey could've had a longer happy ending!

Awww..sad. I hope there is a sequel. You can't leave that there. Come on! geez... I want more! We all want more you know and I know it. ^_^ PLEASE HAVE MORE SOOON! ARIGATO! Oyasumi Nasai!

So thats how serenity knew. Well, that makes sense now. It was nice of seto to get serenity the ring and the ringhe had made for joey was beautiful. I loved how you described it.

What!?!?! That joeys dad din't mean to hurt him?!?! So it was all a mistake? Still it was a very big mistake. And why did he have to kill joeys mom? Anyway, i'm glad joey isn't so bitter any more and maybe now he can continue with his life peacefully. Great job on the fic. I loved it.