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for Take Flight With the Dragon

by Jams

person Jadejj
schedule July 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh ride that dragon Joey ride that blue eye dragon called Seto Kaiba ;P
person Lee
schedule July 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
heh heh *snickers* Looks like someone's been watching a little too much Sailor Moon ^.~ This is cute, please update soon. Does Seto get to fligh again? Does he ever get to kiss Jou? Does Jams try to set them together? I really wanna know, please update *pleading, watery chibi eyes*

~Lee
person Kitty
schedule July 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
-Cracks up.- THAT ENTIRE CHAPTER WAS FROM THE SECOND SAILOR MOON MOVIE! -Falls over laughing.- Oh my..I wonder how many people caught that. If I was the only one, can I get a Seto plushie? Anyhoo. Love the story. Keep it up! I wouldn't be surprised to see Seto posing and yelling "I am Sailor Seto, and in the name of my Blue Eyes, I shall punish you!" -Dies.- XD
person Firewing
schedule July 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh so sweet! So what's Jou going to think when he wakes up inbetween the Kaiba brothers!!!!
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule July 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
DD: Listen, Jams...this is YOUR story! You do with it what YOU want.
YD: That's right! It's damn good. Don't let one review get you down.
DD: Not everyone will share your opinion, and that's fine. It doesn't mean you have to listen.
YD: Remember, this is YOUR story, and we happen to LOVE it!
DD: *hugs Jams* I like you in this story. Look at yourself as an OC.
YD: Yeah...like Brad.
DD: *smacks YD with lava lamp* Don't compare Jams to that asshole!
YD: X.X Sorry.
DD: Anyway...keep it up. Email us if you want to talk.
person Jou-pup
schedule July 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ouch I bet that Mary-Sue comment really hit ya. -_- But I'm glad that you emerged (gotta love that word!) that means that all's well that end's well. ^-^ *squeals suddenly*

Bad pup: O.O what the hell is wrong with you now?

Jou-pup: ^-^ *in a sing song voice* I was in Seto-chan's arms!! *blushes and fawns all over Seto*

Bad pup: ...baka. I'm sure they were refering to Jounouchi not you! Now quit your fawning and leave Seto plushie alone.

Jou-pup: *glomping Seto plushie* Aww stop ruining my fun! I can still fantasize can't I? -_-

Good pup: I guess what Jou-p wants to say is that the chapter was super kawaii and that she enjoy it. Also she hopes that being called a Mary Sue didn't scare you to life. So to make feelfeel better she offers... a brownie! *gives Jams a brownie*

Jou-pup: ^-^ I hear chocolate is good to loosen up the mood. *eats cookies* Till next chapter! I hope it will come very soon.

Ja!

Jou-pup ^-^
person Leaf Zelindor
schedule July 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
awe!!!!! that's soooo cute! -pokes the mary sue- weirdo....
XD
WIng: -grins- she's normal tonight yay! -huggles Leaf-
-blnks- go find your boyfriend wing...
Wing: okay...'gami where are you? -looks around-
-lol-
more soon plz!
~Leaf~
person miss-understood
schedule July 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
mi god gurl!this ficcy rocks!bi the way, i no how u feel about the jamie name, im stuck as a jamie to!XDus aufully named people gotta stick together, ne?lol, well anyways, e-mail me if you update!ja!~miss.narasegaw(jamie)understood
^.^
person ShardyPsycoElf
schedule July 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Shardy: *glomps Jams in impossibly tight hug* MAWHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I found you!! I found you!! *dancing around the room, singing in a high-pitched annoying voice that kinda sounds like Minniuse use on crack*

Kenshin: Oro?? Oh, dear.....

Sano: Shardy only got five hours of sleep last night. She went to bed at 6:00 am and woke up at 11:00

Kenshin: Please forgive her, de gozaru.

Shardy: You are going to update soon, right?? Right??? RIGHT!?!?!??!?! And I want Lemon!! *chanting over and over* LEMON! LEMON! LEMON!

Sano: You have a one-tracked, hentai obsessed mind, Shard.

Shardy: You should talk!!

Sano: *sweatdrop*

Shardy: Okay, anyway, excellent story and I want more soon or else!!!!

Kenshin: Or else what???

Shardy: I only had five hours of sleep!! Don't make me think just yet!!! >_<

Kenshin: I think someone needs to go back to bed, that they should. ^^;;x

Shardy: I'm gonna go get me some Vanilla Coke. *skips to the kitchen*

Sano/Kenshin: NOOOOO!!!!! *in desperate panic, they race after her*
person RhysennBakura
schedule July 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*too lazy to sign in* Oh I love this story. I'd be perfect if only you hadn't added yourself. I makes it too much of a Mary Sue.