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for Take Flight With the Dragon

by Jams

person Jou-pup
schedule July 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
^-^ Yaaay! Too cute!! *hands Jams a Bandit Keith vo doo doll clone* I won't lend you the real one though 'cuz I risk my ass trying to get a peice of hair from that sleezy no good evil guy. u.u''
^-^ I don't have a Pegasus voodoo doll (thank to the millenium eye he always see me coming for a peice of his possession u.u'') BUT I do have a fluffy funny bunny ^-^ I call him Mr. Boogles! (In real life!!) He's an evil funny bunny and now he will 'hey Kaiba' my Seto plushie clone to a cutely-annoying death. ^-^ (kawaii!!u cau can have a clone of Mr. Boogles if you want.

Seto plushie clone: Noo!! You absolutely don't want that thing!!

Mr. Boogles: ^-^ Hey Kaiba! :P *Goofy laugh*

Jou-pup: -_-'' Oookay! I still love my orange bunny very much, even if he does looks and acts weird. So I'm going to let him tell you what I think of your lemon.

Mr. Boogles: ^-^ Well it was all lemony and stuff. I liked it, Jou-p likt, et, every one liked it!! We can't wait for the next chapter. I wonder whill ill Kaiba-boy and Joey-kid will do next!

Jou-pup: Well you heard the deranged rabbit. ^-^ We like you! We really really like you!

P.S: Didn't Jams *in the story* told Joey to meet the gang at the park later the day before?? What would be there reaction to Joey's dissaperance? *wink*

Ja!!
person leaf Zelindor
schedule July 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
-falls over- that was yummy -grins- i really like this fic ^_^ ~Leaf~
person IYYASHI
schedule July 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yuji: Dragon? Well Blue Eyes is cute!
Yumi: Please I beg you Hikari stop! Saying!! CUTE!!!
Yuji: But it was! but fine I hate you yelling at me
Yumi: I enjoyed that fic mostly for your imagintive way of using the Dragons to help Joey aeto eto get together or you know what I mean!
Yuji: Um right for me but with not so much complicated words
Yumi: Please just don't say Pw-
Yuji: Pwetty Pwease update soon!?
Yumi: I hate that 'Pwetty Pwease' stuff
Yuji: Get used to it!
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule July 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YD: OH YEAH!!!!! GOOOOOOOOOOOO SETO!!
DD: That was VERY good for your first lemon!!
YD: See? We told you all you had to do was write it!
DD: *glomps Jams* Good job!
person Lightwolf
schedule July 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well, I must say that anyone who would flame you is absolutely the biggest idiot I've ever met!!! And I don't think that you are anything like a mary-sue, so no problems there. I'm new to Yugi fics, and fairly new to yaoi as well, but I'm enjoying what I'm reading so far, and your stis vis very well thought out and well written. I must say that I get a kick out of the interactions of Seto Plushi, Chibi Yugi, Neko Jou, and yourself in the a/n's: you all have not failed to make me laugh yet. Thanks for a great story, and keep up the good work.
person chibibaka
schedule July 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
HIya! i really love this story! it's really well written! Kaiba/Joey 4 ever! i love the line where kaiba is naked and he says something like '"you liek what you see pup" i was cracking up! joey and kaiba make the best couple. *gives you lots of plushies and candy for u to continue* great job! plz updsoonsoon!
^_^
bye
person The Mystical Dragon
schedule July 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
tee hee... very steamy... very hot.... GET ON WITH THE LEMON ALREADY!!!!!!!!!!!!1
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule July 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YD: JAAAAAAAAAMMMMMMMSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!! *pout*
DD: Calm down, yami. It'll be out today.
YD: I want it NOW!!
DD: You ALWAYS want it now...sex-crazed dark!
YD: So what if I am? I don't hear anyone complaining. *smirk*
person Jou-pup
schedule July 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
^-^ Yay Lemon later today!! I't 't wait! *giggles* And let me guess, Seto wasn't dreaming of his Blue eyes anymore ne? (if he was that was bestiality) :P

-_- I got to say something important..... WHY DID I GET A SETO PLUSHIE CLONE!? It's not fair! I was the one who mentionned about the Sailor moon first! I should get a plushie clone too!! *cries out in tears*

Good pup: Now, now it's okay.You already have a Jou plushie why would you want a Seto plushie?

Jou-pup: So we can have tea parties and eat cookies. You also forgot about my bandit keith voodoo doll. ^-^

Bad pup: *shoves good-p aside* I say we do something evil so we can have our way! I know you waaant to do it!

Jou-pup: You're right! I'll plushinapped the real Seto plushie until I have my clone. No one will say that Jou-p was left out!

Good pup: -_- Please forgive her she is a good girl at heart she won't hurt anyone.

Jou-pup: ^-^ I just ate 12 dounuts and the review cookies! I'm capabf dof doing anything 'cuz I got the sugar high,baby!

Good pup: So early in the morning? Rah help us all (and the plushies) Anyways I hope the next chapter will calm her.
Ja!
person Firewing
schedule July 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I read the title to your this chapter and I was like hmmm... this sounds faguely familiar... I'm so thrilled that I helped inspire you! Can' wait to see what happens next!