Reviews for Take Flight With the Dragon - Yu-Gi-OH

person DarkQueen

schedule October 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM

OH, that was just so sweet and Oh so beautiful I luv it I luv them JOEY&SETO they are just so cute together you did a good job though the story was kind of short but GOOD JOB!!!!!^____^

person ShinigamiYuy

schedule September 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM

I liked the fic right up until chapter 2, where you were introduced. Mary Sues are bad enough, but self insertion is worse than that. New characters shouldn't be added to someone else's work. Writing fanfics is one thing, but taking someones work and shoving yourself in there, where you shouldn't be is wrong.

person Yamijou

schedule September 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM

I have one word *takes deep breath* KAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWAAAAAAAAAAAAAIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII!
*falls over dizzily* I think i held that a bit long...anyway that was sooooo cute

person Emme

schedule August 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM

I like your story. Very nice but I was worried about this sentence in 6

'He has a nice voice,' the blonde noted mentally as he flushed the
stool.

This comes before the lemon. I don't know but if you meant that sentence. I don't think joey would have that that lemon. I think you maybe said "toilet"

person Leaf Zelindor

schedule August 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM

Wing: Leaf has only one word to say...
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!
^_^
Wing: that's translated as, she really really liked the fic ane ise is sad to see it end because it was kawaii
^_^ -glomps Wing-
Wing: O.-....
~Leaf~

person RavenWings

schedule August 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM

^ ^ GREAT STORY!!! I hope to see many to come! ^ ^ I really should finish my other stories... *grumble* *shrugs* Well Ja huns! *hugs & kisses everyone* You did great huns! Loves from Saa Ra.

person Firewing

schedule July 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM

Those three really do make a great family. I've always thought Mokuba was wiser than his years. I like Stitch too!

person Lady Elfskye

schedule July 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM

NOOOOOO!!!! I can't be over already, can it?????? Ah well, all good things must come to an end at some time. Thank you for the wonderful story!! Can't wait to see thxt oxt one. Maybe if I get some guts, I'll write and post the one rolling in my head right now. But I ain't half as good.

Till next time...

Lady Elfskye

person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon

schedule July 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM

DD: AAAWWWW!! Such a sweet ending!
YD: Woulda been sweeter if it ended with another lemon.
DD: *rolls eyes* Not too hard to tell YOU haven't gotten any lately!
YD: *grumbles something about the week dragging*
DD: *hugs YD* She'll be home next week Dragon.
YD: Anyway...this story was GREAT!!
DD: I'd ove to see you write on about Tris!
YD: Me too!
DD&YD: *glomps Jams*

person ChocolateCoveredPeaches

schedule July 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM

whoops I forgot to login *sweatdrops* anyway cute story!! I might just die of such cuteness!!
Ron: I think that would be a good thing right??
CCP: you know...you always think that anything that happens to me is good...me no like you as a muse.
Ron: Please!! *gets down on knees* I'll be good as long as you don't send me back to Hermione!!
CCP: ok but you gotta be good...anyway....Jams I like your story!!

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