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November 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg!!!!!! that old woman...XDXDXDXDXDXD omg!!!!!! i laughed me rotten!!!!! i love this sotry!!!!!! keep it up!!!! ja ne!
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May 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love it! Cookies and pocky for you! ^_^ I'll give you yamyams if you update soon! ^_^
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July 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I must say using the Sailormoon refs for Seto's Exes.. Zoi-kun and Kun-kun.. Um.. Yeah.. Was very... interesting. Write a side story bout that.. Oo;;; Anyways yes, I liked the storut tut the last chappe dun work...*sad face*
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July 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey ^^ Love your story so far, but at the 10tapteapter it cuts off and there's nothing there.
Just thought you should know, Still, Great story, loved that Grandma Kaiba thing!!
Just thought you should know, Still, Great story, loved that Grandma Kaiba thing!!
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July 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ACK! Where's Chapter 4! You promise lemony goodness, then there's no chapter! No FAIR!
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May 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi there!
I just read the second chapter ofr fir fic (and I'm looking forward to a lemon... but that's beside the point) and I think I can help you out concerning the plural of the word koi. Since it is a japanese word it doesn't have a plural form at all, but if you want to ...em... americize it, you could just add an s. Still, you DO know, that it means "carp", right? ^^x Many authors use it as a short version of koibito, but such thing doesn't exist in Japan. In addition, koibito is a very olfashionedrelyrely used expression, too. And you do not use it to address your lover but to talk about him.
All these facts seem to be unknown all over this page. ^^;;
neway, I'm going to continue reading now, ciao!
Horizont
I just read the second chapter ofr fir fic (and I'm looking forward to a lemon... but that's beside the point) and I think I can help you out concerning the plural of the word koi. Since it is a japanese word it doesn't have a plural form at all, but if you want to ...em... americize it, you could just add an s. Still, you DO know, that it means "carp", right? ^^x Many authors use it as a short version of koibito, but such thing doesn't exist in Japan. In addition, koibito is a very olfashionedrelyrely used expression, too. And you do not use it to address your lover but to talk about him.
All these facts seem to be unknown all over this page. ^^;;
neway, I'm going to continue reading now, ciao!
Horizont
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October 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I finally found you!!!! *even though you are sitting in your bed behind me* *glomps!*
Seto: Shardy?? You glomped Kassie in her bed???? O.O
Malik: I wanna join!!!!! ^_^
Jou: Back off, Malik!!!! >_<
Anyway, um, I'm trying to spell check your crap, man! I'm trying really haaaaaaaaaaaaaaard!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *breaks down into Sailor Moon sobs*
Seto: Oh, damn, there she goes again! *covers ears*
Well, I already know what all is going to happen with Late Night Crisis. *whispers to reviewers* Tell her she needs to make a third one. Okies, laters!!!!! ^_^
Seto: Shardy?? You glomped Kassie in her bed???? O.O
Malik: I wanna join!!!!! ^_^
Jou: Back off, Malik!!!! >_<
Anyway, um, I'm trying to spell check your crap, man! I'm trying really haaaaaaaaaaaaaaard!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *breaks down into Sailor Moon sobs*
Seto: Oh, damn, there she goes again! *covers ears*
Well, I already know what all is going to happen with Late Night Crisis. *whispers to reviewers* Tell her she needs to make a third one. Okies, laters!!!!! ^_^
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July 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Heh heh heh, that granny kix @$$. She's kewl, keep her in the sequel! XD
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July 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh, your chapter 4 has problem. The story's nice though
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July 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
XD I loved it! ^^
The whole thing was awesome! ^^ I loved teh grandma... lamo!
And Seto/Jou is one of my fave pairings!
And your spelling wasn't too bad. I've seen worse. And you know the best way to improve your spelling? Read and write more. It really helps!
~Taryn~
The whole thing was awesome! ^^ I loved teh grandma... lamo!
And Seto/Jou is one of my fave pairings!
And your spelling wasn't too bad. I've seen worse. And you know the best way to improve your spelling? Read and write more. It really helps!
~Taryn~