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OMG plz! just plz! update this fic really soon! I can't wait for jou and malik to fuck again, and over and over and over again, until it gets to the point that he couldn't walk for a week! The scenario would go more like this: Malik panted as Jou teased his opening by licking at it, and shoving his tongue into his protate over and over again
"Oh joey fuck me...so hard that I wouldn't be able to walk for a week"
"Like this..." he shoved his cock so far up his ass, Malik almost lost it
He now pounded into him fast, rough and hard.
"Harder!...faster!...unnnn faster! oh joey..."
Joey complied
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and it went on from there...

I love it! I love all th totore I wonder about the totore for kaiba though, I can't wait for that one

I love your story.. Please continue it or else i'll be forced to bother you until you do... *smile*

WOW!!! you realy did your homework. as it turns out, jono was the name of the "joey look-alike" in
the playstation game " forbiddin memoris" and in the origanal japanize manga tword the end of
serise tduelduel city, jonoichi (joey) finds out his master in the days of the pharow was yami
the pharow himself. (*crys* i'm sorry for the bad spelling!!!! O_O')

cool! this is the best yu-gi-oh slash story i've read so far. please update soon!

This fic was wonderfull, full of kinky sex scenes and lots of lime to go with the lemon. And the really unknown pairing of Malik and Jou was a pleasant surprise. I really wish the author would continue on with it.

This is a great story and I can't wait for more. Please when you can, update it.

This is a good story. There isn't many stories with a Joey having an Yami. I just can't wait for an update.

mmmm poor Jono....

mmmm delish! continue soon!