rate_review Reviews

Please let Yuig and Joey make up? Poor Yugi so confused. Yami and Seto could show off their pets? That could be funny or tense. Keep up the good work in your story.

Plz keep going its a great story!!

Me likey a lot ^__~ It was cute and continue with the Yugi Yami stuff.

Hi, sorry not to have reviewed sooner, I wanted to so badly but everytime I kept getting sidetracked and all this stuff.... BUT, now that I"m here, this is so fatanstic... I love this story, and don't pay too much attention to such pathetic flames, just ignore them.

I hope you continue soon, this was so funny, but so cute. I'm a die hard S/J fan and this was just terrific. Write more soon,

-Seth

The story was GREAT, don't worry about one flame. Beliveyouryourself and pay no attention to the 'ones' that only wish to put ppl down for their own amusement. You are a GREAT writer and we all make mistakes we're not perfect. To me the story is really well written. I love this couple, I'm a Seto/Jou fan from the heart; although I tend to make them suffer, hehehe what can I say I love to torture them...Well AWSOME job, despite what 'one' person thought! Plz do continue, don't let it get to you, because that is all 'they' want!!!
LATER...

OMG! so so funny!! Im laughing at the scarcastic lines! like: "Hey little master can i sleep at the end of the bed tonight!" whahahahaha!!! OMG PLEASE CONTINUE YOU FIC! if you don't...I will cry!

awwwww

i really liked the story anyways even if it was a roleplay

please please please write more!!!

love it!!!!

First off, I think y'all are doing a great job with the story. It is very entertaining. Yes there are a few grammar mistakes, but I've never read a fanfiction that DIDN'T have a few mistakes. Authors just like everyone else are human. So I wouldn't pay any mind to such a worthless remark. Reviews are meant to help authors improve. Anyone who bashes a story like that without being tackful and helpful in his or her remarks probably is a terrible writer as well.

As I've said, your story is very enjoyable. In a few places it is hard to follow, but I think if ya add a few more discriptions on scene and such that it would flow more smoothly. I'm very anxious to see what ya come up with next. This is such fun to read!!!!

God of Sun Dragon says:

You left those tags all through the story which tells me that you didn't write this.
This is some role-play you did and slapped you name on it after half ass pulling the tags out.
One more thing, learn the freaking language if you going to attempt (and I use that term loosely in your case)
to role-play in EnglisPathPathetic.

i love it! i honestly thout it was a one shot so imagin my surpris when it was up dated:)
i cant belive that review i mean i know you cant pleas every one but that was uncalled for.
i hope you guys uupdate soon