rate_review Reviews

I will admit that the language errors can be a bit troublesome as I use a narration software to read the fics to me; however, that girl's comment about the tags is just stupid. I have a friend that is a wonderful writer and many times he has told me of an idea (or vice versa) and we 'brainstorm' them together on skype. We don't actually take the fics word for word from the conversations, but we do save them, tags and all, to refer back to during the writing process. So, don't worry about 'Her Royal Bitchiness' and just have a good time.

love this!!!! really cool!!!! keep it up!!!! ja ne!

i don't think your that bad!!! i mean. owkay there're some spelling errors but who doesn't? only if you read it 50 times over is it really good. i'm from belgium and i'm the best of my class in english but i'm also drawing all the time. i'm bad in the boring things but i don't need those things. i won't pity you cause i love this story. it's truely beautifull and i love it! don't listen to flames cause they're just trying to let you delete your stories and let their stories stay. that all. they tried it with me a dozen times but i didn't give in and now i don't get any reviews on the normal fanf. i don't really care cause i have a lot of friends there. so just don't listen and keep your chaps up cause i love this!!!! bye-bye!!!

i don't think your that bad!!! i mean. owkay there're some spelling errors but who doesn't? only if you read it 50 times over is it really good. i'm from belgium and i'm the best of my class in english but i'm also drawing all the time. i'm bad in the boring things but i don't need those things. i won't pity you cause i love this story. it's truely beautifull and i love it! don't listen to flames cause they're just trying to let you delete your stories and let their stories stay. that all. they tried it with me a dozen times but i didn't give in and now i don't get any reviews on the normal fanf. i don't really care cause i have a lot of friends there. so just don't listen and keep your chaps up cause i love this!!!! bye-bye!!!

i love the puzzleshipping!!!! bye-bye!!!! keep things up!!!! c u!!!! ja ne!!!! sayonara!!!! uhm...goodbye!!! and now in dutch!!!! goededag nog verder!!!! so uhm...bye?

kinda odd but in a good way i like it a lot and can't wait for the next chapter

I will be watching this.

P.S.
The name is Robert Jordan.

I just read your response in what is labeled as chapter three and I totally agree with you, I can't believe they thought english was a second language for you! As for using roleplay to write your stories, all I can say is thats something I really wanna try myself and its a very creative way of writing. I'm really enjoying the story so far and am about to read the next chapter....

Luv the story!

i wanna know more. is Yugi going to be a cat and have Yami show him off to Seto and Joey. what is going to happen? please update soon.

Oh, Hell no!!! Don't leave it there, thas SOs SO GOOD!!!!!!!!!!
Please more, more, more! Seto/Jou ok that's a plus, but Yami/Yugi too! They're Cute too, not as cute as Dragon and his Puppy; but cute and Yami is sexy as hell ^_~!!!
Well, please update soon, this is getting so good! I wanna learn too *pouts*!!!
LATER...