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by SailorPanda

person Mandy
schedule July 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!!!! I LOVED THAT SO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!! I didn't think there were any Tea/Yami Bakura fans out there!!!! I love that pair and that pair olny!! My God you were a genouis writing htis! If you can, I'm just asking, if you could give me some advice on my lemon for those two. I kinda need help cuz I just got stuck all of a sudden. o.o awful feeling! Make this a huge lemon steamy romance!!!!!!! This couple rules!!!!!! You are going on my fav storues list! sO if ya wanna help me, email me! ^^ bai!
person Spielwords
schedule July 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Why is it that many of the better writers eventually start writing pornography? It doesn't do your talents justice.
Porn is a cheat and is degrading to your excellent writing skills. A seasoned writer can communicating close reonshonships without the use of such overt language and over-used images. That is why (in my opinion) your non-sexually explicit stories are far superior to this. I came on this site hoping that you could write about intimacy (romance) without falling into the pit of porn. I won't be back on this site....you may write lemons because you get good reviews from them. But that just shows the uncontrollable appetites of the readers. It's not worthy of your talents. ------
person New Yami
schedule July 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Please continue. There needs to be more str8 lemons in YGO. And this was truly one of the best ones I've read!
person BAKURA GIRL
schedule July 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WOW! HOT! HOT! HOT!

I HOPE YOU WRITE MORE BECAUSE IT'S JUST SO GOOD AND THERE'S TOO MUCH YAOI - NEED MORE STRAIGHT LEMONS, ESPECIALLY WITH BAKURA!!!

EXCELLENT JOB! PLEASE CONTINUE!
person shad0cat
schedule July 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is a very good story. Yami Bakura was very beleivable. This story is an excellent example of how a lemon doesn't have to be yaoi to be good.
person dino
schedule July 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
please don't let this be a one shot, steamy and interesting pairing. not many of these around, ilike, please write more!
- dino
person Psyienna
schedule July 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This was a lovely lemon, and deserves to be more than just a one-shot! Please write more!
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule June 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YD: I really hate her.
DD: Me too...but this story was GREAT!
YD: It was...VERY well written.
DD: Are you going to write more? It's not over, is it?
person Kitt
schedule June 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
:O Never would have thought of YB x A, but that kicked arse. Mwe ^^;v.