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by thequeenofthenile

person smalvina
schedule May 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
nice fic
person Anon
schedule December 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Awsome!!! Update Soon!
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule August 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YD: Where's the lemon?!?!?!?!
DD: For once, I agree with my yami on this one...where's the lemon?
YD: This is good...tho the chappies are short and you're cliffing them! *grumbles*
DD: *pokes YD* Give it up. Please update soon.
person leaf zelindor
schedule August 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
AW! that is soooo cute! ~Leaf~
person Neo Qwerty
schedule June 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Neo Qwerty: *who bawls at the simple tought of being denied yaoi, so she's creating a fountain*
Yami Azerty: *threads water* Great, look what you did! Anyway, don't give up and try to get it at least in this month! Bye!
NQ: MUUUUUUAAAAAAAHHHHH!!!!
person KK^_^
schedule June 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is kinda cool. The first chapter or two confused me at first, but I can be a little slow. Now I'm really enjoying it. I'm watching for that update, okay? You're doing a great job with this.

I think poor Mokuba's about to be traumatised. Unless they keep him from finding out. I'm waiting, only you can write the rest! And that means, the rest will have to be good_^ K_^
person Frankie
schedule June 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ROLL ON MONDAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Lunara Moonbeam
schedule June 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Augustin: *is pokeing a Joey Voodoo doll with many pins*
He doens't like Joey. And update soon! Me want lemon!!!!!
~Lunara~
person Neo Qwerty
schedule June 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Neo: Oh, gosh, I'd kiss you if I wasn't already with someone!!! *HUGE, and I mean HUUUUUGE glomp on you*
Yami Azerty: *getting jealous, narrow his eyes* Why couldn't she be with me... No, she had to choose a guy who truly is an arse... Sex? Sex is soon? *whoops around* YEAAAAH!!!
Neo: Warning, horny dark boy on the loose!
Az: I- WE'll be waiting for it on Monday!!!
BOth: We LUUUUUUURVE the story! C-ya!!!
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule June 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
DD: HEHEHE!! Funny!!
YD: You mean I gotta wait until MONDAY for a lemon?!?!
DD: Calm down yami.
YD: But...but...MONDAY!!
DD: *rolls eyes* Any chance you can get it done sooner?