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July 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Meh, cute chapter!!!! ^ ^ plz continue, it was worth the wait.
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July 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I liked the chapter, hmm but pretty short :( But i'll be expecting more! XD
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July 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*sigh* i think that was an evil place to leave off. damn you. I shall have to attack you with my samurai sword now. *falls over*
hell, I'm kidding. I like this story. :) I think I already reviewed once, and I have yet to change my opinion... though I do find myself wondering, how old is Mokuba? ((doesnt actually know, much to her embarrassment))
hell, I'm kidding. I like this story. :) I think I already reviewed once, and I have yet to change my opinion... though I do find myself wondering, how old is Mokuba? ((doesnt actually know, much to her embarrassment))
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July 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
DD: What do we think?!
YD: We think you need to write more!!
YD: We think you need to write more!!
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July 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Keep going i love this ^_^x
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July 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This story is freaking awesome!!!
OK, now that I'm finished squealing in delight...seriously, you have a talent for writing some of the most...ahem, passionate love scenes I've ever read. You also make the story interesting and very sensual, which is essential to a great story in my opinion. You also know the value of proofreading (YAY!!) and/or you just type it right the first time, not not sure which. It's always great for me to read a story that doesn't have a million spelling errors and grammar screwups and stuff like that. Congratulations on the first 19 chapters, and I hope to see more!
BTW...Seto Kaiba is my favorite character, so I was glad he's part of your fic. ;)
OK, now that I'm finished squealing in delight...seriously, you have a talent for writing some of the most...ahem, passionate love scenes I've ever read. You also make the story interesting and very sensual, which is essential to a great story in my opinion. You also know the value of proofreading (YAY!!) and/or you just type it right the first time, not not sure which. It's always great for me to read a story that doesn't have a million spelling errors and grammar screwups and stuff like that. Congratulations on the first 19 chapters, and I hope to see more!
BTW...Seto Kaiba is my favorite character, so I was glad he's part of your fic. ;)
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July 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Me again...I wanted to admethmething to my review.
Sometimes when I'm reading a story, I'll think of a song that would go right along with a plotline or a character's feelings or something of that nature. Well, when I was reading the chapter "Cafe 'Kura", I started humming "Are You Happy Now" by Michelle Branch, and realized that that would really fit Seto Kaiba\ood ood in that chapter. I mean, the words alone are
enough: "Can you look me in the eye/And tell me that you're happy now?/Can you tell it to my face/Or have I been erased?/Are you happy now?" Call me crazy, but that's what happened. Definitely a sign of a good story when I start thinking in terms of music to go with it. Again, this story rocks.
Sometimes when I'm reading a story, I'll think of a song that would go right along with a plotline or a character's feelings or something of that nature. Well, when I was reading the chapter "Cafe 'Kura", I started humming "Are You Happy Now" by Michelle Branch, and realized that that would really fit Seto Kaiba\ood ood in that chapter. I mean, the words alone are
enough: "Can you look me in the eye/And tell me that you're happy now?/Can you tell it to my face/Or have I been erased?/Are you happy now?" Call me crazy, but that's what happened. Definitely a sign of a good story when I start thinking in terms of music to go with it. Again, this story rocks.
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July 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YD: * eye eyes* I'm blind!
DD: Gods, Otogi! Get a REAL car!
YD: It's not like you can't afford one!
DD: Gods, Otogi! Get a REAL car!
YD: It's not like you can't afford one!
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July 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow,nicee discription.Wow, I wish I had money to buy a car,and do that.Lol.Good chapter I wanna know what happens next.Plz continue! :)
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July 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
[[bad review]]
i find this story delightfully amusing. :)
Uhm, I dont know what much I can do in the way of reviewing, since I gather it's not finished, so... I guess I'll stick to saying that you're doing pretty damn good there so kee keep it up.
i find this story delightfully amusing. :)
Uhm, I dont know what much I can do in the way of reviewing, since I gather it's not finished, so... I guess I'll stick to saying that you're doing pretty damn good there so kee keep it up.