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Well, how in the hell did Yugi get "bred" for something like that?! Did they do something to him? Good story anyway.

Whew, raw deal for Yugi, there ain't it? Why can't he come? That's not something you're going to leave unexplained, is it? Is he impotent? Other than that...very hot. Yugi's a character you can make Uber-Uke!... and still have him completely in character.

holy shit that was amazing i mean you had me crying and jesus if i was a guy -- we're not going there!! anyways i loved reading this and if i had started reading this while it was incomplete i would have been the first person in line for your head b/c your right those were the evillest (don't care if it's not a real word) cliffies on record esp. that last one. please keep writing and update again soon.

thanx mizukimarr910

Great good gods.... this was -gorgeous-, so gorgeous, lovely and lovely and lovely until that sad little pain at the end. That Yuugi literally -can't-... it's so unfair!

(which makes it prettier, waaah! ;_; ^^)

I particularly loved that sense of divinity Yuugi was given at the beginning, that he could be seen only by Pharaoh and that his name was a golden bell hung in the lead slave's heart, that if rung would shatter her body ... it was as if she was Yuugi's Metatron. ^^

And the loving at the end... gods, so sad and pretty.... like them.

THank you so -very- much for sharing your hard work with us. Sticky Fingers award, for certain sure. ^^

intresting story
-a roaming gambler

Fave quote: Little one you don't have to kiss my royal ass


This is the best fic ever of Atemu and Yuugi!

Yamimi mental for this fic!

I've read this so many times and I still want to read it again, this is so cool....

I love this story, this is the sweetest thing I ever read, it makes Yamimi's work look like dirt.

OOH OOH, YOU SHOULD RIGHT ABOUT WHAT LIFE IS LIKE FOR YUUGI NOW THAT HE'S YAMI'S FINEST CONCUBINE!

good chapter.and story,bye