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June 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story is good. Hope you write more soon.
And I think Seto and Joey should win as it was Joey's first time. Or Ryou and Bakura.
And I think Seto and Joey should win as it was Joey's first time. Or Ryou and Bakura.
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January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
god that was hot and asomev story i loved how yah had jou so inacent (sp) and backura so carring it be nice if yami could trudt backura for once
anyways great fic you have ta keep goin
anyways great fic you have ta keep goin
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May 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
nice story
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September 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WOW man that was deep and way sexy I got to tell you I LOVE IT man I can't wait I need to know who wins... I vote for Jou&Seto so the others would know that not only experience ones can win I should know ^____^!!!! But Yami&Yugi Kura&Ryou are also great so be gentle with them.... Maybe they all should be tied! So please continue don't be mean.
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July 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Aaaaa!!!! I loved this chapter!!!! It was so sweet and had 3 lemons at the same time!!!! Frankly, i don't care who wins, but i wouldlike it to be seto and joey. Even though maybe thats not possible since it was their first time. If they won, i think it would be shocking to everyone. I'm not sayingthis cause their my favorite couple, no. Has nothing to do with that. :whistles while looking away: Anyway, update soon and take care.
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July 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Jams: Seto and Jou gotta win!!!
Neko Jounouchi: Not with minute man over there... ::points at Seto Plushie::
Seto Plushie: Excuse me?!?! What was that?!?!?! ::tackles Neko Jounouchi::
Jams: Oh yay!! ::grabs popcorn:: Good story by the way...
Neko Jounouchi: Not with minute man over there... ::points at Seto Plushie::
Seto Plushie: Excuse me?!?! What was that?!?!?! ::tackles Neko Jounouchi::
Jams: Oh yay!! ::grabs popcorn:: Good story by the way...
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June 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
DD: This is different than I remember.
YD: Yeah. Did you rewrite it?
DD: It's REALLY good!
YD: Yeah. Did you rewrite it?
DD: It's REALLY good!
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June 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I must admit, your story is amazing, the plot is wonderful, and well... the lemons are BLAZING HOT!!!! the only thing you need to work on is your spelling.
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June 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Nice story....very nice. I especially liked the shower scene...something about warm water pouring over your body and the one you love in there with you just makes a person randy as hell, lol. Add more to the story soon!
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June 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Jams: ::cracks whip:: Down white dragon!! Down!!
Seto Plushie: Very funny Jams... >.>
Neko Jounouchi: ::glomps author:: It's pretty good so far!
Jams: Yeah keep up the good work! ^^
Seto Plushie: I'm gonna sleep with the mutt in this 1 aren't i?
Jams: Most likely... I wouldnt read it otherwise! XD
Seto Plushie: Very funny Jams... >.>
Neko Jounouchi: ::glomps author:: It's pretty good so far!
Jams: Yeah keep up the good work! ^^
Seto Plushie: I'm gonna sleep with the mutt in this 1 aren't i?
Jams: Most likely... I wouldnt read it otherwise! XD