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You are hopeless as a writer and human being. Please stop torturing us all.

OMG!!!!! Joey can get pregnant!!!! I love it!! I wonder what their kids will look like? I'm sure they will be stunning. I have a hard time deciding who i like more, seto or joey. So far, joey is wng, ng, but not by much. Anyway, i love this fic. Update soon.

i really enjoy reading your stories please continue this one ^_^x

Hey, it's a good story. But that chapter kinda left off in a weird place...not a cliffy...not a regular ending either. Almost like it was cut off from the rest of the paragraph. Is it your style? Well, you can do whatever you want because...it's your story. Also, it was a little confusing because sometimes you switched from one scene to another and kept going back and forth without any indication or separation. It's a nice change, just a little confusing. Anywayz, this story has plenty of potential, I hope to see the next chapter soon.

Please update soon! Soon soon! Yep! This is really, really good! Please! X.x Can't live without update. . . *struggle*

thats fun.... some of the parts and the sentancess are cheesy...you spend too much time on somethings and too little on others... i LOVE the consept of Joe having a deck of cards(especialy if "common" people did not have them) but i did not know they had cards back then.... and if you are at least make them different.... Oh and no one would be that nice to slaves actualy... anyways.. continue writing the storry.. good job