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September 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Man, now I'm torn. Part of me thinks that's a great ending, and another wants more more more!!
I really liked how you changed their names to reflect how they were feeling. It was a great subtle touch.
Last thing: Sex = good uncertain sex = HOT
You write great lemons. Do more! Do more! ^_^
I really liked how you changed their names to reflect how they were feeling. It was a great subtle touch.
Last thing: Sex = good uncertain sex = HOT
You write great lemons. Do more! Do more! ^_^
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June 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I like what you've done with this fic. Throughout all three chapters, I could feel the strength inherent in Honda and Jou's relationship. The dialogue felt natural and easy, especially in Chapter 1. Keep up the good work, and I know the rest of this fic will be as terrifs whs what you've written so far!
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June 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
DD: That was SO good!
YD: You're not done, are you? You can't end it like that!!
DD: Well, technically, the author can do whatever they want.
YD: NO FAIR!!
DD: *shrugs* We'll have to wait and see
YD: You're not done, are you? You can't end it like that!!
DD: Well, technically, the author can do whatever they want.
YD: NO FAIR!!
DD: *shrugs* We'll have to wait and see
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June 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was really good.... I liked how Jou finally realized WHY he likes Honda in the end...
Warm embraces -- it's such a cheesy device; but at the same time, it's SOOO cavity-causing sweet.
Warm embraces -- it's such a cheesy device; but at the same time, it's SOOO cavity-causing sweet.
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June 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YD: Poor Tris!
DD: Poor Joey!
YD: This is where we left rea reading the lst time.
DD: Yeah. Please put the next chapter out soon.
YD: This story is great. Your writing style is fantastic!
DD: Poor Joey!
YD: This is where we left rea reading the lst time.
DD: Yeah. Please put the next chapter out soon.
YD: This story is great. Your writing style is fantastic!
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June 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very interresting, I would like to see more please. ^_^
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June 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was great! More....Please?!
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June 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
DD: Ooooo...you've posted this here! YIPPIE!
YD: We've wanted to read the end of this one for AGES!!
DD: Please update soon!!!
YD: We've wanted to read the end of this one for AGES!!
DD: Please update soon!!!
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June 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yay! =^_^= I've read this one back on FF.N... hrm. Dunno if I reviewed though... =^_^;; Anyways, there's SUPPOSED to be more since it's not finished yet, right? Cause I've been waiting for a while now.... *latches onto FC's leg* PLEASE OH PLEASE OH PLEASE GET THE NEXT CHAPPIE OUT SOON!!! T_T
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June 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Mm, I can't wait to see more, you've definitely peaked my interest. Keep it up! *thumbs up*