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August 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
A four-some!!!! Fucking sweet! PLEASE CONTINUE!!! I hope there's a four-some. It'll make things much more interesting. Things are already great, but I think it'll just make it better.
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July 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow....great story!I LOVE seeing Seto all uke!Jounouchi should get a sex swing!Your all suspended from the ceiling and stuff!
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July 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i reallly love this story... but it did make me cry. and that is a RARE thing.
i hope joey gets it in the end, maybe seto will snap and lose his mind or spirit, then maybe he'll realize what he's done.
anyways plz email me when you update.
till then. asta.
i hope joey gets it in the end, maybe seto will snap and lose his mind or spirit, then maybe he'll realize what he's done.
anyways plz email me when you update.
till then. asta.
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July 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
While this story is certainly filled with plot holes, it's the best damn "senseless piece of writing made to make people horny" I've ever read. Heh heh heh. Know what I think? I think Bakura-bastard needs to be taught a little lesson.....
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July 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
In the beginning I like this story but chapter 7 and 8 is bugging the hell out of me. Joey is become evil and I honestly don't think that Yami won't participate if he knew that Seto is being held against his will.
Look at what your have:
Illegal contract
Kidnapping
Sexual Manipulation
Sexual Molestation
Rape
At first I thought Joey was doing this because he like Seto and I was going along because of the premise, but he is not beating him and the fact that Seto know he was raped should tell you that things should not end happily for Joey and his bastard crew. This is the first S/J story I read where I want Seto to crush all chances and hopes that Joey has of them seeing each other. Oh Yeah and still get the God Card then go out with another man if he wants.. I mean Total destuction to your JOEY.
Take this however you want.
Look at what your have:
Illegal contract
Kidnapping
Sexual Manipulation
Sexual Molestation
Rape
At first I thought Joey was doing this because he like Seto and I was going along because of the premise, but he is not beating him and the fact that Seto know he was raped should tell you that things should not end happily for Joey and his bastard crew. This is the first S/J story I read where I want Seto to crush all chances and hopes that Joey has of them seeing each other. Oh Yeah and still get the God Card then go out with another man if he wants.. I mean Total destuction to your JOEY.
Take this however you want.
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July 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
BP: Yay! thank you! thank you! thank you! *glomps Reppa*
HC: A little cruel don't you think?
BP: *snorts* Not if I have anything to say bout' it.
HC: Saddist! But I totally agree great chappy!
BP: *nods* more soon!
HC: A little cruel don't you think?
BP: *snorts* Not if I have anything to say bout' it.
HC: Saddist! But I totally agree great chappy!
BP: *nods* more soon!
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July 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Gods did ya have to hurt Kaiba like that...that was so bad... he got enough of that when he was a kid...
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July 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
De'se's going to see Otogi?
YD: This is NOT going to be good for Seto!
DD: Is it just me, or is Jou getting more twisted?
YD: *nods* Definately.
YD: This is NOT going to be good for Seto!
DD: Is it just me, or is Jou getting more twisted?
YD: *nods* Definately.
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July 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Your story is beautiful
Though, I have to admit, I was rather displeased with chapter 8.
It's not that your writing is bad, oh no, it's just the chapter's plot.
Keep up the good work!
And maybe a little less pain for Neko Kaiba?
No da?
Though, I have to admit, I was rather displeased with chapter 8.
It's not that your writing is bad, oh no, it's just the chapter's plot.
Keep up the good work!
And maybe a little less pain for Neko Kaiba?
No da?
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July 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
COOL!!!!!!!!I'VE READ THE FIRST FEW CHAPTERS ON FF.NET AND THIS ROCKS!!!!!!!!!!!PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!^______________^