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If Joey gets Seto back, Seto better be grateful! I'm enjoying the turn of events in this story, you really keep the suspense going! Hope you update soon!

deffinatly a little twizted for what im used to, but im thoroughly enjoyng it. now this is real adult fiction, not the suck ive been seeing lately form this site. please continue.

ackkkkk

i need more seto torture

it was soooo good!!!!

please update soon!!!!!

love chap 12 (and all the rest)...hope to see more soon...and a sequel too.

Hey! Nice to see you updated! Took you long enough. Creepy chapter. keep going! You get rid of that writer's block?

~Hitori

Well since I showed this fic to Nemi-chan and she's been reviewing, I'll give in my two cents about it as well.

To be honest, since Seto was raped I have only been skimming the chapters afterwards, and nearly stopped reading when Yami at first decided to jon. n.

Your characterization is pretty good in most aspects, though I honestly believe as vicious as Jou can be to his enemies, I doubt he would go to such lengths that your Jou does.

At first there was something about it I could not quite put my finger on that bothered me, then I realize it was because it was a 'pretty rape', a drugged rape that makes the victim look like he/she was willing.

Just as being under the influence does not excuse someone from being charged with a crime in the court of law, a person being drugged into being more complient does not really change a person's mind about whether he would want to have sex or not.

Drugs, and booze just only hinders a pe's 's judgement or capablity to respond to a situation, not make them a completely differently person (though you hear those those who live with users claim that).

Hey toatal cool story. when are yoingoing to update it? Did Joey's father do all the stuff Joey is doing to seto to Joey?

No Yami/Seto?

Booboo.

Oh well, it your story! And a very nice story too!

Continue!

Wow...I just discovered this story and Gods I'm so impressed! I love it! I'm a huge BDSM/Kink fan and this one fufills lots of my Fanfiction needs. The characters are well deved aed and interesting, the plot moves foward at a good pace, and it's obviously well researched as far as various 'toy's and such go! Keep up the amazing work!!! I can't wait to see if Joey can take Kaiba's submissiveness to the next level!

~Anatra

Once again a lovely chapter to a lovely story. And for future referance, riding butt ass naked on a motorcycle is called breezy ridin', and He's right's it's loads of fun!! ^_^ well anyways hope to see more from u soon!!