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oooo this is really good! can't have a party without...toys;)

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Taryn: OOOHHH! COOL!
Faye: That was great! No, awesome!
Taryn: This is so funny too! I absolutley love this fic! I always knew that Jou had it in him to do this. And a kinky threesome! I can hardly wait for more now.
Faye: I can't believe thta Seto would put up with it. But he likes it.
Taryn: You absolutely must update this soon!
~Taryn~

DD: Oh gods, I can't wai YD: YD: Me either!! HURRY UP!!

Jams: Ha!! This is gettin' better and better!!
Neko Jounouchi: ::cracks whip:: On yo' kness BISH!!!
Seto Plushie: <.< I think not...
Neko Jounouchi: ::thwacks Seto Plushie's butt with whip::
Seto Plushie: O.O YEOW!!
Jams: XD ::falls:: Keep up the good work! ^^

Holy fecking shit. This is the first out and out Jou/Seto fic I've ever read. Tons and tons of Seto/Jou. A few with Seto and Jou as equal partners. But this is the first Jou/Seto. Charactorization is great! For the most part, I don't understand why people will dump Marik in with Yuugi's group, as that isn't likely to happen anytime soon. You've made it work, though. Marik is very nicely done, still very sadistic and pyscho. And bastard!Jou is an interestingst ist in any fic. Look forward for more chapters!

DD: *drops dead of a heart attack*
YD: Oh gods!! That was SOOOOOO good!! More! Go Jou, you sadistic little bishie! WOOHOO!!

*laughing hysterically yet again* Oh damn...poor Seto!! He had it coming though, lol. This is gonna be fun...he has to put up with a year's worth of this...how will he handle it? Quite roughly, I'm sure, LOL. And I hope he prays to the gods that Malik doesn't get in on it...heaven help him if he does!! This is incredible...please add another chappie soon!!

O_O Well this is certaonly original...Good God I'll never look at Seto/ Jou stories the same way again... WAY TO GO!!! Keep up the good work... So you like Seto Jou huh? Well I run a website dedicated to them and I would be honoured if you would like to make a contrabution to it. The URL is: www.geocities.com/yamivixen/blue_eyes_black_dragon.html

Once again keep up the good work!

Jams: O.O OH MY GOD!! You have GOTTA continue this!!
Neko Jounouchi: Yeah like fast.... Jams is gonna be bouncing off the walls for DAYS over this 1!!
Seto Plushie: ::reads over chapter:: What the...?!?! NO FRIGGIN' WAY!!! ::blanches:: :P
Neko Jounouchi: Aww you liked it and you know it!
Seto Plushie: O___o
Jams: ::glomps author:: More soon!! ^^