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for To Come Undone

by aquarianbabe

person smalvina
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
loved it
person Elle King
schedule October 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That story was hot! :) I really liked the Jou/Seto pairing (more so than Seto/Joey).
person Hikari-Tenshi
schedule June 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
not bad for a first timer keep up the good work you do a much better job then me and i read lemon/lime fics and i still can't do one of my own they come out as action/adventure/fluff then anything else i hope the rest of your lemon/lime fics come out good and i like the sisturation setting as well ja
person Frankie
schedule June 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh this rocks! J/S is my fav pairing! I hope to hear more from you soon!
person Reppa
schedule June 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Whoo! I love Seto and Jou fics, especially this 'un! You write wonderfully, you'd better keep up the good work or else! X3
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule June 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YD: Oh YUMMY!!
DD: Ditto! gods!
YD: So, Seto drugged him to get him there, huh?
DD: Desperate times call for desperate measures, ya know.: I\: I'd love to see you write another one!
person Keysha
schedule June 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Um, DAMNNNNNNN!!!!! *wipes sweat from forehead and drool from chin* Um, that was like, HOT!!!!! Seto and Joey sex just gets me riled! *eyes husband with predatory gleam in eyes* He's in real trouble, lol. I hope you add more...this was waaaaayyyy good, and I loved it! Seto/Joey are one of my fave couples too... please add more
person Kitt
schedule June 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Heheh. Never thought I'd like a JxK fic XD. Cool :D.