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for Not Another Halloween Story

by DragonMistress

person rez
schedule February 7, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Hot, gratuitous, and funny. Exactly what I needed! Thank you very much for the story. Sad to see it on unofficial hiatus just when the 'plot' was really thickening *wink* KTN
person Anon
schedule May 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Loving the story. Keep it up, I would love to read more!
person Terry
schedule March 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Keep it up, very entertaining story!
schedule December 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM

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schedule November 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
There is nothing wrong with, nor will there ever be anything wrong with shameless smut in a story lol. And I was liking the whole chapter and then that last line happened... and now I feel a big bucket of uh oh coming on...
person silverblaise
schedule November 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Nothing wrong at all with shameless porn! :-D And that was a hot example of it, hehe. In my head I heard a big Dun-dun-DUUUUUNNNN! at reading the end of the chapter lol but really do want to see what happens next as it seems to be turning into a love quadrangle. ^__^
schedule October 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I have to say that first chapter was a complete joy to read and I'm really hoping there will be a chapter 2 soon! Good costume choice by the way, didn't see that one coming lol.