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for Yuugi, his love, and his tutor.

by Louisverse

person Anon
schedule March 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
so, when do you think you're gonna update this?
person Phoenix
schedule February 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
That was excellent, thanks for picking up the challenge. I appreciate the restraint, frankly I think it makes you a even better writer than you were before. The girls were smoking hot and Yugi was well characterized. I really like that this didn't go all the way in the first chapter.

I look forward to reading more.