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for The Pale Savior

by SasatheShy

person Keara
schedule June 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great well least atemu does have Yugi too bad yami is only using him which sucks but what can you do well let's see how this pans out then keep up the great work gtg now ja ne
person Keara
schedule June 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
huh great now whats Atemu up to why treat Yugi in such a fashion is he doing it on purpose if so then why not just stay with the woman you so obviously favor and stop being so mean to Yugi or you will lose him forever for someone claiming to be the lord of tranquility you certainly are far from tranquil this is cruel and mean to Yugi what could he have done to deserve to be treated that way or is he JUST a servant and nothing more to you huh well keep up the great work gtg now JA NE
person Kayla
schedule May 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
this chapter was worth the wait cuz it was a awesome chapter!! :)
person Keara
schedule April 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Like your giving him a choice bakura sheesh well keep up the great work gtg now ja me
person Keara
schedule April 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Well seems everyone is finding twins though why would that man attack the village after one paid forms slave and just want exactly is yami after well guess I'll find out soon keep up the great work gtg now ja ne
person Tikayla
schedule April 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
this one was super thrilling to me wonder who save royu
person Keara
schedule April 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Huh me thinks that while he is fond of salilah it's more out of gratitude the anything the sheer fact that she had wanted a voice in who he picked aka someone who met her standards and didn't get in her way but then yugi is found and his innocent nature draws atemu too him plus he always sad he preferred guys over girls and yugi fits that criteria but now yami worries me why did he show up then vanish and what's with the cold smirk guess I'll find out at some point keep up the great work gtg now ja ne
person tikayla
schedule April 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
really love the story
person cattib
schedule April 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This story is so sad...I feel sorry for Yugi having to share Atem..Its not the usual story I read or follow..maybe Im hoping for the best in the end...dont know...
person keara
schedule March 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
huh Atemu what have you done this is such a horrible mistake you can't just have two your not considering everyone involved now Yugi feels used like he's just only good to see to your own needs that he's not special not important of no value to anyone not even the one person who promised him a safe haven who promised him so much yet what he wanted most is being denied him again you better hope this doesn't destroy him especially since the puzzle I get the feeling is somewhere with him I don't know how or why exactly but I know he holds ties to its disappearance and it does you no good if you hurt him like this this is such a bad mistake Atemu it truly is.

huh well hopefully things will get better for Yugi but I won'd deny I'm worried and scared for him heaven knows what this will do to him and so what if you never got to choose its not like even if you DID help in choosing any would suffice cause you only want him for yourself just as Yugi does though I highly doubt its for the same reason after all your fine your free to see you family and live in refinement.

up until now Yugi never had ANY of that hell his life was about to be thrown to the side like it was worth nothing all because he wanted to save Ryou you may not know what thats like but he does and he's terrified of doing even the slightest thing to upset Atemu hell I bet he's gonna keep all this bottled up and not say anything for fear of being sent away even if it just winds up hurt him more so do us a favor Salliah and try to understand his situation its far from easy huh but all that aside we all know whoes truly guilty keep up the great work gtg now JA NE