rate_review Reviews

All I can say is that when I got to "“Not a problem.” Anzu heard Atem’s voice in her ear and saw Yuugi shoot his fist out as though giving a fist bump to an invisible man." I lost my shit laughing. This seems more like an anime version of something that'd pop up on Superstories or the EMCSA, so not sure how welcoming an audience you're gonna get here, but this doesn't even come close to the craziest thing I've read on here so do your thing, dude.

I'm not sure how to feel about this work... It's my favourite pairing but the characters are so OOC, hm.

Despite that I am looking for someone to take up a YGO challenge fic I've been doing the outline for. If you're interested please contact me.

Regards,
Phoenix

not bad, man. better than I thought. the last line in the first chapter just made it sound like Atem was planning to make Tea his.

As promised - I will review what I read. *takes a deep breath* I seriously mis-clicked the link. Note to self - Get the mouse FIXED. Onward. Writing, spelling and grammar are a cut above the usual mess found in these kinds of stories. Unfortunately those good points do not outweigh the fact that you seem to have an obvious hate for Anzu and large women in general. There is no plot except debasement and humiliation of women who have abundant charms. Honestly I'd suggest you find a fetish - hate site and post your debasing stories there because while I'm not a large woman and I felt insulted by your story after half a paragraph. You are not telling a story you are expressing hate, either at yourself or at someone else? Your mother or sister? Wife or lover? An ex? Don't know and don't care. I finished the chapter (barely because hate and nastiness do not entertain me) but will not read more.

Thank you for your effort
Maggiemay