rate_review Reviews

This is not intended as a flame, I promise. But to be honest, I felt like I was being told an account about walking to Walmart. Just the way you wrote it. It was like "Yeah, so one day I decided to go to Walmart, and then I saw this cat, blah blah blah." Especially the last line. I felt like you just got tired of writing it and decided to throw something down just to make the readers feel happy. I couldn't really get into it, ya know? The idea itself is alright, you just need to work on your style. :) Keep trying though!!