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for Ambivalence

by PupshitDesu

person Kitsune
schedule October 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wheeee updates!! And they were excellent ones, as usual. Your story is so very real - not sugar-coated or cheesy. I love how you get into the characters' head. And Joey's wet-dream? Hoooly cow...my expectations for the 'real thing' have just skyrocketed, lol! Thank you for more chapters!! ^____^
person Jei
schedule October 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness. I can't believe I am just now stumbling across this fic. This is my first review for your story but I actually read all 7 chapters before deciding to drop a review. I must say I am beyond impressed with this story. I love how you don't make Jou and Seto so lovey dovey off the bat like most puppyshipping tend to do. The hostility that they have (and perhaps pent up sexual frustration) those two have are interesting to see unfold. It's a little saddening to see how the old gang have not made an appearance. It's kinda weird to think that Yugi, Anzu, And Honda would just abandon Jou like that after high school. It's obvious that Jou needs some guidance from making constant foolish mistakes. Including his sexual escapades with Kitmaura. Despite how weird he is, I actually like his character since he at least tries to take care of Jou in a sugar daddy type of way. I'm curious how long Jou will keep this destructive relationship up (Kaibe needs to stop being a douche and get his puppy back!). There's so much I want to say and comment on about this fic, but I'm tired and my fingers are going to give out soon. Anyway, I look forward to future chapters.
person Kitsune
schedule October 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I squealed once when I saw this story was updated, and I squealed again when I saw there was more than one new chapter! I LOVE THIS STORY!! You have an amazing way with words and getting in characters' heads. The uncomfortable silences between Jou and Seto are so intense that I feel awkward myself while reading them, lol. Can't wait for another update! Thank you for an awesome hour of pure entertainment!
person Anon
schedule September 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great story. I'm checking for updates!
person Kitsune
schedule September 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
LOVE this story! It is so incredibly well written; you definitely have a gift. Your character description is amazing, and you are so true to the characters. I can't wait for updates!!
schedule September 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i dont like that stupis guy =[ come on kiaba get ya act together ^^ More more ^^
schedule September 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
^^ i love this story so far and i cant wait to read more ^^ update reli reli soon ^^