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for Love, Lies and Lipstick

by lostintheheartland

person Lella
schedule December 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
*flails* Omg this story is great! To be honest I avoided it for awhile since I usually don't go for the "disguised as the other gender" plot, but I kept seeing the title pop up. I can't wait to find out what happens!

I love how Joie is really showing her stuff; she's so skilled! And it comes off as things a person can realistically do. I also love well developed supporting characters, and don't mind if the main story has another side plot thrown in, like Gina's past. And the chapter where he's Joey again and meets up with Kaiba- I like how that played out. Because yeah, once they finally got a chance to speak to each other it wouldn't take long for them to confess. I'm glad that wasn't dragged out with misunderstandings, but rather relationship drama about how Seto lives in the spotlight.

Please update! I thought about joining little dragon to read the rest, but I can't write worth crap so I guess I wouldn't be a contributing member. I like to do fanart but sadly I just don't have the energy to create anymore.
person mistalis
schedule December 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
this made a nice day wonderful. Thank you for posting up the next peaces of the story. I do hope to see more soon, this story is just so wonderful.
person dragonlady222
schedule December 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad Jou told Seto that he was a virgin and let Seto try to seduce him again. Gina is a very persistant little girl. He father is on a serious mission. I am glad Joie is such a sweet girl and helped that poor girl fix her dress.
person dragonlady222
schedule December 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad that Jackass got kicked out, the bitch too. Joie definitely is a great organizer. She is impressing Seto more and more. Too bad he is so dead set against her winning.
schedule December 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ms maggiemay, will you marry me? (sorry just kidding ^^'), I'm officialy in love with your writing :), we'd be a perfect match, you'd write and I'd read ^^,lol. But seriously love your yugioh! fics, can't wait for more :).
schedule December 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love it. Not only is the story engaging but the characterization is great, the non-cannon characters are fun, and the dialogue isn't forced. I love the concept. A wonderful story. I hope there is more. Tried searching for the yahoo goup and couldn't find it. >.<
person TabFan
schedule December 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I tried to join your Yahoo group. Wasn't able to. I really like this story and Lost and Found. So giving you my e-mail: tabjancar@gmail.com, or t_j_tnt@yahoo.com.
schedule October 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
It's kind of funny. When I started on the first chapter I was like "No way", but that was mostly because Jou was SO infatuated with Kaiba, it seemed ridiculous. Now I'm COMPLETELY hooked. The cross-dressing is used better than I've seen before, sometimes it gets downright idiotic in certain fics, but you've handled it really well! I don't know if you're copying the Japanese social rules, but I'm just suddenly feeling like a loose woman (or something.. did I really just use the expression 'loose woman'?? XD .. oh god) when I sit and read about all those expectations and limits and manners and so on! XD . But, buttomline, I love it. I'm dying to read more! :D . I've had a long break from YGO-fanfics, I thought I'd kick it up with one of your excellent stories :)
person Lexi
schedule October 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Woohooo! New chapter and a fantastic one at that. Alright, love how Seto protects Joie from Marcelle, but I doubt that's the last we'll see of him. Though I hope it is because I don't really like Marcelle and how he treats Joie especially. Personally, as a woman, I would totally not want to date him and not because he crossdresses. Anyway, poor Joie, she nearly blew her cover, and poor Gian since she's in such shock about being recognized by her ex-lover. I love how defensive Gian is of Joie, Jou himself kinda needs someone like that and Gian is perfect. Seto is swimming in dangerous waters because if he's not careful he could lose his chance with Jou though he doesn't realize it. I love how Sakura and Peaches give Seto advice on how to approach the situation of his attraction to Joie. Poor Joie, she was stuck between a rock and a hard place in that last scene with Seto. I hope she gets a hold of herself and reminds herself that Seto's the reason she is cross dressing in the first place. Good luck to Jou/Joie. Keep up the great writing, though I hope for some updates sooner since it's such a great story. ^^
person dragonlady222
schedule October 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Poor Seto is really confused. Joie did not lie to Marcel, she is homosexual. She never said she was a lesbian. I hope Gian will be okay. Peaches and Sakura are awesome.