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for Love, Lies and Lipstick

by lostintheheartland

person Snarry91
schedule September 20, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I wasn't sure of this story after reading the summary. But, when I read it I started enjoyingit. I noticed what chapters are up now are not the whole story. And that this story was last updated about 3 years ago. But, I was so hoping you can come back to it and post the rest of the chapters. Or at least tell me where I can find the completed version. I also read some of the reviews and it leads me to believe this is a trilology. I'd love to read the other stores also after finishing this one. So please update soon. Or at least if you can point me to where I can find the completed version as well as the sequels

schedule August 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Hi! Will you be updating this? Cant seem to find your this story @ a dragons lair archives?
person Lexi
schedule July 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
So I just realized I didn't post a review for the latest chapter. Which normally I would review for. So first, let me say that it was amazing and it had all the right quantities of seriousness and humor. I love how Jou as Joie could've nearly beat Seto and then Seto's so pissed after that he demolishes the other candidates. And I feel so bad for Gian and the Chou family. Gian because of the betrayal of Sanu and the fact that he lost years of being with Naoko because of him and then the Chou family with little Gina being slapped by her father after revealing her brothers' secret. The horrible reality that the twins were abused and Naoko did nothing, it's all heart wrenching. I love how Yuugi goes around in disguise and then Jou asks Mokuba about it later. It's just a great chapter and I can't wait to read the next one with the chess match.
person Anon
schedule June 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon! I love your story and can't wait for more!
schedule April 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'll admit, I was hesitant when I first started reading. The concept was an interesting one, but Jou seemed....quite overzealous in his love for Kaiba. Seemed like you were starting too strong off the bat. And the "we love you Jou" thing that Tristan and Otogi had going was just plain weird. Still is (at least in this fic, in my opinion).

But boy, did you win me over. You have a FANTASTIC writing style. I haven't seen a Yu-Gi-Oh! story in years that has this many original characters, and I love them all. Your subplots are as well-developed as your main plot is. I adore your cross-dressing Jonuouchi; I find him wonderfully in character, yet he's grown a lot. He's open a mature, but you show us it's still him with wonderful little stunts like his quick run to the bathroom for five minutes to laugh off the incident with Kaiba getting hit by the REBD tail. *Chuckles* Your humor is delightful, as well. I've chuckled many times, and outright laughed at a few.

In other words, this story has been an absolute treat. <3 Never stop writing, my dear.
person tk04
schedule April 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for posting this story online. I been dying to read it again. I try to join the group but it seem I got reject. Not sure why. Oh well, thank you so much.
person PurpleSunset
schedule March 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm right there with AliceWinter. Perhaps you could put another adresse on where else to find L L & L here in the reviews, and one adresse for Lost and found on that review page. (Sorry for the bad choice of words, english is not my motherlanguage)
I don't understand why they have hidden your story! You have never "demanded" reviews. Asking ist something completly different and even there you weren't as bad as other authors I read!
schedule February 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I can't believe that they canceled your fic! That was one of the top 3 Yugioh! fics on here, the shame oh the darn shame. I also adore you LL&L both are really good, and your plots are fantastic. Would it be too much of a bother to send me a link to anywhere else that Lost and Found can be well found? I've been waiting impatiantly for every chapter (seriously it's that good, if it was sweets I'd have no teeth left,lol) and adoring every update. Finding out that sucha fic went sayonara is such a huge dissapointment, please please please Maggiemay goddess of fics? =[ T_T. My email is alicewinter09@gmail.com , hopefull fic slave now waiting for link ^^'
person gapeachfru
schedule February 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Please tell me that you are going to post the rest of lost and found at little dragon. I enjoy all of your stories and I'm always waiting on your updates. I hope you continue this story.
person BlackRosePirate
schedule February 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Firstly , Thanks for the update ^^ and it was ssoo juciey too ^^ i absolutly love your stories and i cant wait for RS and LAF to be updated to ...although im sad to hear i wont be able to read lost and found on here any more and i was just wondering if there is any where else i can read the rest of it plz ^^ my email is devil_lizzie_1991@hotmail.com i really hope that there is still a place to read it ^^as its a story i look forward to being updated and i think its petty that they have told you to remove such a minor thing i mean its not like your hurting any one i certainly take no offence im just here to read brilliant stories . ^^ thanks for reading my reveiw!