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August 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
i absolutely love this story! i can't wait to read more!! i hope yugi wll confess to yami and atemu soon! and atemu quit being a jerk lol
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April 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Sry bout not reviewing for some time but it is nice to see things progressing nicely let's just hope atemu learns now along with America that trust is a TWO way street not one well keep up the great work grg now ja ne
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December 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i love the story line and the relationships between the humans and the nagas! i read all the chptrs without stopping because i just didnt want to stop! i hope that therell be more chptrs soon!
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November 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this story alot, I loved all of the details and the obvious time you put into this. Can't wait to read more of it!
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October 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Well the chapters still feel a bit rushed, but with the fast updates, good plot points and all, it's still a great read :) And having the Yami's show up now too- Ohhhhh it just added a new element to this story that I can't wait to see play out!
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September 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was a good chapter, but does the Naga General have a name? And I can't wait to get another chapter.
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September 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Just found this story and I can say it has started very good. I love this story and I can't wait to see what is going to happen now that they are in Eygpt.
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September 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Poor Yugi! I love your incorporation of Naga's in the Yu-Gi-Oh world.
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September 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Cute! Bathing scene with Atemu and Yugi. I really can't wait to see where this is going aslo learning about the Naga'a more. Great chapter and I like how the pace of this story is going.