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Noooo!!! You can't stop here! I don't know anything! I need to know more! And read! And what is wrong with Honda? It's Otogi, ain't it.. Hmmmmm.... MORE, hun, MORE! Don't worry, I'll review the shit out of you! :D

I can't wait for more of this story! If you have more posted at Little Dragon, then I hope I get accepted to join so I can read and review more. I just love all your stories! I hope Otogi didn't have a hand in Honda's break-up, mainly because I love to see them paired up. I hope Jounouchi sees Kaiba and things slowly start to work out. I was wondering if since he helped out that one time that he would be stuck helping out each time. I hope there is a way to break the "curse" of the "pyramid of hell" too. Until next time!

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ChibiRinni ^_^

i absolutely love this.
you're amazing. your style of writing, fluidity, and character voice is so strong
and the plot
OH GOD THE PLOT
and the sub plot
OH GOD THE SUB PLOT
GMDKLGMKLDS
never stop.

All I can say is thank you. You entertain me and that is precious.

Took me forever to read this, it's soooo loooong and I am actually busy all the day, but I HAD to read it ;). I'm looking forward to the next chapter, it will be most exciting! Jou is really narrowminded sometimes.

It took mme 4 hours to read this and i got to the and and was like =O Waaaaaaa noooooo wheres the rest O.O Pllzz write more

**Bows before greatness** I believe I have told you in the past that I adore your writing, but I'm here to tell you again. I LOVE the dimensions you add for each character, making them seem more real and true to themselves as the story continues. Every detail you added only made the story that much better. I laughed, I sniffed (near tears about the baby, but didn't quite cry), laughed some more, was on the edge of my seat, yelled at the characters (I do that to the TV too), and laughed even more. If fact, I had my fiance looking at me funny before informing me I would be late for work. I made it on time, but this story was just so awesome I didn't want to stop!

I loved how you ended it openly and was relieved when you said there was more. When Kaiba cut him off I was lost! I was yelling telling him, "You idiot! Jounouchi was just starting to come around to you and you let him go!? I hope Ai knocks some sense into you and you rush back to have your way with him." Okay, I'm going off on tangents, but your stories always inspire me to work harder and try better. I miss all of your stories and I'm finally getting a chance to go back and read the ones you have posted here.

If I haven't said it enough, I'll say it again. You. Are. AWESOMENESS! I want to hug you! I can't wait for the next chapter/story/idea you come up with. As far as I'm concerned, everything you touch/write must turn to gold. Keep writing and I'll keep reviewing. Sound fair? ^_^

~One of your biggest fans,

ChibiRinni

*Feeling totally inadequate after the previous review*

I just wanted to say that I really liked this. I'll have to read it again because I was really tired when I read it through (What? Sleep? There's fanfiction to read!) and I think some bits escaped me. The computer recording everything complimentary that Joey said about Kaiba made me LOL and I felt bad at the end when Kaiba cut Joey off altogether, but Kaiba would do something like that, eh?

I wonder if there will be some future issues from the sharing of ba/ka/whatever. (Yes I did say I would have to read it again). But if you are going to write more, I'm sure we'll find out. :D

Ok I feel like a bit of a stalker since I personally emailed you from the Little Dragon group, but I HAVE to leave you another review since the other one was only my thoughts from reading halfway through the story.

I have to say I am beyond impressed with your writing skills. I felt like I was watching a new hit drama series. Except rather than watching with my eyes I viewed it through my imagination all thanks to your wonderful way of storytelling. I'm a HUGE puppyshipping fan and so it's be a loooooong time since Ive reading something so angsty, dramatic, and action packed centering around Jou and Kaiba. I really wasn't expecting Mokuba to have a kid nor Kaiba actually being in love with Yugi at some point in time but it just adds to the entertainment and surprise factors. I could go on and on with all the things I love about this story, but I'll stop here. I'm eagerly looking forward to the next "episode". Not sure if you ship this pairing but I'd love to see some Honda/Otogi (even if it's just hinted) in the future. Also curious to learn more about the dynamics of Atem and Yugi's relationship too.

So this is a series and this is the first. I like it. Poor Joey and Mai. Poor Seto. How could Yugi do that to Seto? I can't wait to read the next part.