rate_review Reviews

Yay! Some Jou and Seto dialogue! Even though they were confessing their love for one another like I hope it's nice to see them interacting with one another and almost forming a truce of sorts for the time being. Seeing Seto as a loving father figure is a little weird to me but it shows anything is possible, right? Also I'm a little curious about the timeline of each episode. Im sure this is a stupid question, but how much time passes between each case? Like I'm curious because I want to know how long Jou has been dating Tatsu and what is the level of their feelings. What I can tell us that Jou is dating the guy out of obligation in an attempt to understand his own sexuality and to give Tatsu a chance since he isn't a asshole like Seto.

wh...what? *cries* what is going oooooon, why is there not more?! I would like more...and honestly, I heard Death changes a person...but fuck, Yuge...meh.

what a cliff hanger. heh. got me hooked. I sit there and I'm going "period killer" now there's a lot of interesting ones, Jack the Ripper, yes, but there's the Zodiac Killer. Keep going, length doesn't bother me at all. Long or Short, it all depends on how well it flows.

Another awesome chapter. Atem... I really don't like. If that *is* Yugi then he's been blinded by his obsession for Atem and I can't help but hope that he and Atem get their comeuppance in the end. :/ I doubt that Jou would willingly talk to 'Yugi' even if Kaiba did have him brought to the pyramid and I love the fact that Kaiba's ka is sneaky and trying to help them. If Kaiba had realised that Jou was there then I'm sure it would not have gone well! (And I love AI's underhandedness. A sneaky computer, who'd have thought! XD)

Honda and Otogi... I wonder what the hell is going on with them? I'm sure it'll all come out in the wash. And for a moment I was sure that you were going down the road of having Shizuka be pregnant (which I'm sure was the point). LOL.

I'm glad the kid got his dog back but I feel real bad for his mother. Maybe her husband will wake up, maybe not, but I loved the entire chapter and I can't wait for more. :)

Wow. Family crisis all over the place. I wonder if it was Malik who stole the valuable family-something-something from the family Jou first helped.. Oh well. Probably not. Yugi and Atemu are really twisted, damn! Love AI, I mean, who wouldn't? The story with the asshole-guy and rape was interesting, and also interesting that Jou let it slide even though he probably figured the girls' scheme out. For some reason it bugged me alot that Shizuka could just argue her way into the business-related DANGEROUS stuff like that. Had it been anything private I would've followed, but since it's business, and frankly not something she has any right to meddle in, it kinda rubbed me the wrong way. But hey, at least it went really well. Did Jou rat out the boy in the tree because he had to to stay in the Yakuza Lords son's good books or? Really looking forward to the next update! :)

I can say I've truely enjoyed reading the first few episodes of your story. I find the the storyline interesting and your writing format to be fun and original. It's like reading Manga without the pictures! Can't wait for the next episode...update soon!!

I absolutely LOVE this story! It's like watching one of those investigative shows, that's how good it is. The Ka and Ba still confuse me. :/ I kinda get what they are, but even reading up on it, I got lost. I can't wait for the next update though! The more Yugi and Atemu get mentioned, the more I grow to hate them. I agree with Jounouchi; that little bastard is no longer his friend. I wish I could see your things on Little Dragon. I got denied membership because the owner didn't respond to my request. I sent it again, but now I'm not sure. :/ I'd love to see your other stories again. Good luck with the next chapter! I'll be here waiting to read it! ^_^

~ChibiRinni ^_^

Another great chapter. I like the mix of mystery and drama and Honda and Otogi are being a couple of drama queens. I also love Kaiba's AI computer and if anyone can find Malik, it's Jou. :D

I am so looking forward to seeing what happens next chapter. :)

Very happy to see a new story and your writing is getting better and better. I really like the dynamic exchanges between Jounouchi and Ai's and am eager to see the plot unfold regarding the mystical elements as well as the subplots particularly that of Ryuuji and Honda. I don't tend to review much so when I do it is usually because I really like how this is playing out.

OMG I freaking LOVE AI! She is so awesome! I can't wait for the next chapter! I hope Otogi and Honda don't kill each other. I wonder what it was that hurt their friendship. I hope Otogi didn't cheat on him or something! >.> Yeah, kind of rooting for them to hook up as well, lol. Keep up the awesomeness Maggiemay! I look forward to it always!

~ChibiRinni ^_^