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Ughghghhghghgh this is getting soooo good i have to say you are one of my fave writers ^^ and i seriously cant wait for the next chapter lol can we have it tommorrow i reli reli want to read this so much!

Another sit on the edge of your seat chapter! I must say all the hostility between Tatsu, Seto, and Mai was a little overwhelming at times ( in particular Mai's bold threesome comment). Man Jou's love life is totally in shambles. I completely agree with Ai about Jou and Seto needing to take their issues to bed and have hot steamy sex to help sort out their feelings for each other and make it more defined.

I also enjoyed all the new plot twists (Tatsu's baby mamma drama). Still curious about what's really going on with Serenity in addition to the story behind Honda borderline extreme hatred for Otogi (god, those two need to have make up sex or something as well).

Oh and last thing, Seto "breast feeding" scene was awkwardly hilarious! He's such a good daddy! Though a bit overprotecting but that's totally Kaiba's nature since he doesn't have too many love ones like most people. Looking forward to another exciting drama filled episode!

I don't think the sound I made after I finished reading this chapter was human. It was between a squeal, a squeak, and a scream of all different emotions. The character interactions are still my favorite! I love each of the characters (even psycho Mai)! I feel like this really is a show and I can't wait till next week for new updates! UGH! I'm so bubbly right now like my excitement is going to explode out of me like a shaken soda can! ><() Cliff hangers are so evil and yet I love you for them! Keep up the awesomeness that is you, Maggiemay. I enjoy it very much. Thank you for writing such a wonderful story and for keeping it going!

~ChibiRinni ^_^

Once again, another great episode! I'm on the edge on my seat reading them. Please update soon...I can't wait to see what happens!!!

Just to start out, I have to let you know that when I see your name on a story on this website, I don't even read the summary. I dive right in, cause I know I'll love it! I'm so happy that you decided to give AFF another chance. That said, I'm very much enjoying this story! I love the interaction between Jou and Seto, although I really want some action (maybe just a kiss?)... I always love to read some side Honda Otogi stuff, so I like that as well. Ai is a wonderful oc! Can't wait for the next update! ^.^

I love this story and like a greedy child i ask for more. PLEASE.

^^ this was a good chapter ^^ him and kaiba are slowly getting there ^^ i cant wait for the rest you fantastic writer you!

Oh, I'm sure the next chapter will be very entertaining. :)

I'm still enjoying this story immensely. For someone who wanted to cut Jou out of his life, Kaiba isn't doing a very good job of it. :P

I can see the end coming with Tatsu. If he doesn't end up dead then that could complicate his and Jou's working relationship.

Those last couple of lines... hoo boy... Jou has a lot of explaining to do unless he sidesteps now and puts it off for later.

Next week can't come quickly enough! :D

Yea, first review ever so I am sorry if it isn't very helpful. I like the length of your stories so far. I feel that by keeping the lengths of your chapters fairly long it allows the reader to fully grasp the amount of work and consideration goes into investigating each crime set up in your chapters. I would like more Seto and Jou action, but I feel that if they interact a lot then I wouldn't enjoy them getting together as much in the end (Absence makes the heart grow fonder and all that jazz). Moreover, Seto should have to work for the awesome that is Jou. lol. I would really love it if you wrote a chapter to have Jou find a famous killer especially if it is in a virtual world setting maybe as for publicity or as a partnership/team thing with Seto.

I really enjoyed this chapter! I love how Shizuka and Otogi are getting bigger roles in the grand scheme of things. I'm still extremely curious as to what occurred between Honda and Otogi (all the hostility from Honda is so perplexing!). I also hope the wife and husband end up working things out. For their own sakes and for their son. I was a little surprised that the wannabe yakuza boss wasn't confronted directly in this episode (will he be making another appearance in future eps?) it's funny how Jou uses a homeless kid for new leads on his cases now, but again I hope we'll actually get to know about the boy or that his role becomes bigger in the future (if there is in fact a future for him. Everything else aside what I enjoyed most is Jou and Ai's interactions. The dialogue between them really shows how much Ai has grown from being just a super genius program into an entity with a personality of her own. It's obvious she has nothing but her owners best interest at heart. Anyway looking forward to more chapters and hopefully learning more about everyone's past.