rate_review Reviews

All i have to say about nobody reading this....YOU HAVE GONE MAD!!!!!!!!!!! I really don't know about the others, but I am always to "squeeeee"-happy after reading the newest chapters to make sense. Usually it lasts about a week and by that time you have a new one up that again robs me of all higher communications. I LOVE this story and have a VERY hard time waiting patiently.

I absolutely love your stories and have been stalking you for years. You are an inspiration to me and I wish I could become a brilliant writer like yourself. Also, would you like me to review each chapter you write? I don't want you to think I'm spamming so I usually just review once or twice. Please don't stop writing, you're one of the main reasons I made an account on here. You are much loved maggiemay.

I absolutely love this story. It took me several days to get caught up on it, but I have to say reading it all at once is wonderful. I don't know what I'll do now that I have to wait for new chapters. I have to say though that this chapter was by far my favorite chapter. I loved the ending especially with how Jounouchi struggled with his control. I know how he feels. I truly love this story. I love the details, the concept, the plot, the characters. I could read this story over and over again and never get tired of it. Thank you so much and I hope you update it soon. I can't wait for more.

I normally wouldn't review because I'm not a member on the site, but when you said you aren't getting enough reviews to tell if people are enjoying this, I had to say something. The story is extremely well-written and thought out, and while the characters are different from what I'd normally expect, I find myself okay with that. The story itself is sufficiently juicy and productive at the same time, and because it's so in-depth, lengthy, and capturing, it's kind of funny when you forget it's fanfiction. It's very original and not off-the-wall like some of the other stories I see around here (werewolves? Seriously? xD)

In any case, I look forward to the continuation of the series!

OMG.
I came across this story this week and have been reading it constantly!!!
It is so well done and written that it is a pleasure to read you dear.
Very well developed characters and plotline.

UPDATE PRETTY SOON PRETTY PLEASEEEE ;)

ok so im really bad at reviewing stories, either I say something wrong or something not right.But you know me maggie. Im a tease and a whiner..so im reviewing..really? I did not like Shizuka in the last chapter but now I really like her. turn around here. Im just just a little confused about Roland and Thomas but thats probably me and need to reread a couple of chapters..anal that way..dont feel unloved because some loyal readers are like me and do not review because well the story is soooo damn good that we dont know what to say, were speechless.....catti

Wow, I just finished reading all of the chapters of this story and it had me more addicted then Winding Road. Even the scene with Jounouchi and his sister made me cry. I can't wait for the next installment and will probably be waiting impatiently, but it will definitly be well worth the wait. Keep up the great writing and character development. I am truly a fan of Ai.

So I read the latest 'L&F' chapter and its really good, sad 'bout Shizuka :(, happy J finally breaks it off with T (hate the later, gotta looooove the former). Personally been a fan of your story ever since the first chapter I've read and loved right from the begining. The way you bring the readers into the story is almost like we are in a show of it happening, however portrayed as very real with pinces of magic and all. Also read your AN and decided to rate and review, dear goddess of authorship and Yugioh! fanfics, please keep the story going so that I can keep getting some of the best JxS fix of Adff.net. ^^; only a minor stalker : ) mwahahaha ahemn =]

holy crap! this is a great chapter - i like the whole story, to be honest. I try to check back every other day to see if a new chapter has been uploaded.

It's rich and has a deep plot within plot with plots. The last chapter was bittersweet, and showed backstory on Jou and his reactions and i think the end was well put together.

I find it extremely hillarious that Tatsu thinks AI is a person. But that is mean of Seto and Jou that they haven't told him. There is a lot of stuff going on, it's difficult to keep up! I can barely remember all the names they are constantly throwing around XD