rate_review Reviews

wow, there is a lot going on in this chapter. I think that Watanabe is Wang Lok, and that Katsuya is the holder of Seth's Ka.
Just my feeling. Please don't keep us in suspense to long.

Maggiemay ~

I thoroughly enjoy all of your work. This one is weird, but very interesting and I seriously cannot wait for more :)

~pixies

awesome story, i look forward to reading it every week - just like a series!

its so detailed and i love setoxjoey stories. -

cant wait for next time im definitely hooked

People probably aren't reviewing because they don't know what to say. I love this story! So you gave Shizuka lupus. That's a surprise. Only know of it from watching House. Also, the victim's EX-HUSBAND was the problem, not Thomas. Interesting twist.

WOW, if I ever saw a completely blind, idiotic person-!! How can Tatsu mistake Jou's emotional breakdown with a situation where it is in ANY way timely to start pressing for sex? Seriously? You've almost made him too stupid, he is an abusive drunk in the making, really. GOD. I have to admit that sometimes it becomes too overly emotional for my taste, for exapmle in the scene with Thomas breaking down, I know that it is some very intense emotions that they are dealing with, but sometimes it is just a bit too much. But that is your writing style, so please don't pay too much mind to my strange comments, this is still a GREAT story, it's just something that has been rummaging around my head for a while. I must admit that a cheat-sheet would be welcome, I'm finding myself grasping at a failing memory too often when they talk about the different people involved in the case.
AND: Thank you, I'm looking forward to writing some more again, hopefully, and be around more.

I just want to say this story is one of the best I've ever read. I'm so glad I gave this a chance when I saw your first chapter. Eloquent and extremely well written, it's a terrible shame you don't have more reviewers. I find myself constantly checking the YuGiOh archive for updates on this. I eagerly await the next chapter. Please keep writing.

~Lady

Please don't think we don't enjoy your story. I love this story and have read it from the beginning three times, and it captures and enthralls me more every time. I anxiously await the next installment.

I love your work...you can stop writing, your story are the high light of my week I can't wait to see how Seto wins Joey over. I hope Tatsu takes a long walk of a short pier soon I can't stand him I'm glad Joey left him or leaving him soon.

I just wanted you to know that I really enjoy this story. And look forward to each new chapter.

Just finished reading the new chapter and I simply can not wait for the next one, but I know I will have to. You are by far one of my favorite authors and I'm happy that you have started posting here again, here's hoping your stories remain under your name. Please continue writing this wonderful story, I really wish to see how it ends.