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I adore you...umm... I mean... I love the story! First off, I love the realism of the way the characters interact, it makes the story that much better. Your writing itself is impressive as is your creativity and innovation. I'm very impressed and can't wait to read more. I tried to follow your link and it doesn't go anywhere...

With much respect
~RP

Wait - the old priest is mad at him? I get absolutely nothing XD . I think it's been too long since I read this story, I find myself grasping at the names and different situations and not bring able to put everything together. Atema and Yugi scare me though. I don't quite understand all the Ka and Ba business (as in who needs whose and why and what and so on), Seto explanation went a little over my head, I didn't really get it.Well. I'm not going to guess anything.. xD

wishing youd update again
really want to figure out whats gonna happen next

I'm not on here much, so I've just gotten to this. This was the best all day distraction I could have hoped for! I know the rabid fan girl thing gets old, so I'm just going to let you know that I keep hitting the next chapter button and squealing in hopes that these two are finally going to get together! Please, please, please keep going! (And maybe indulge your humble readers with a graphic wet dream or other total fan service scene?) Can't wait to see where this goes, as always!

Kinkou3@aol.com. Oooohhhhh, I have another theory I have to say cause it is just driving me nuts! Serenity becomes a goddess that needs a priest and she called jou back to her hence why he has a little disoriented time slip when he got back. Who better to have than someone that love you more than any other? Awww man I have soo many clues that are pointing to this it's not letting me away from the story. Hope you are having a good time .

Does Jou really balieve that Yugi still has SEto's heart? Or is he just covering himself in a thick, thick layer of denial because he himself isn't ready? Kitty-cats! :D

Hey there, how's it going?...Just wanted to add my own reassurance that I'm still an avid follower of this story, as well. I'm on the edge of my seat as the story develops because I'm so anxious to see how things are going to turn out. Most importantly, the relationship between Kaiba and Yugi and what happened that fatful night...Please keep updating! I check on a daily basis to make sure I don't miss any new episodes! So, keep it up and hope to see more soon ;)

theories huh? My main theory right now is the Ka atemu is searching so hard for lies within Jou's son... they only got the wrong one. Serenity holds it now and soon shall be entrusted to Jou... hence why they can not locate it at this time thanks to devine interference. and this whole episodes at the monthly times smacks of a merging in the past to tie Seth with another. it explains how they have always acted but with the newest remerging stronger it grows. hmmmmm i can't wait to see this flow along the paths. keep up the good work ^^

I am still loving your work, Maggie, but I tell you that both here and at LD. :) I guessed that Tatsu would not give up, but damn, the man has NO chance. Seto does have to make things more difficult, but that's Seto. LOL.

I'm not even going to touch guessing how the arc is going to end because, as I've said before, I'm not terribly good at getting the subtleties... but I *am* going to guess that whatsisname... Watanabe? is involved somewhere along the line. Just because I vaguely remember that there was mention of an 'insider' at some point, he's an ass and he's not been mentioned for several chapters.

I'll look forward to seeing what happens next time. (And whenever we get to the next visit to Yami and co, what happens there.) ^_^

love you maggie...thank god jou dump tatsu. he is annoying as hell!!! haha