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I seriously hope they don't remove this story because I love it and you have never demanded a review.
I think if they try they would have a lot of upset readers Demanding to have it back.
Keep up all your fantastic stories. They are my escape from RL.

I'm no ton TOS team but the "How long will it last? Who knows? I'll keep updating as long as y'all keep enjoying." you placed in the author note on chapter 16 sounds almost like demands for review. could that be it?

I'm not a TOS member but I've checked every one of your notes. I see nothing that could be an outward demand. Unless they didn't like your contest you had with Reality Shifted, but that didn't seem demanding reviews. Plus a lot of people do something like that Several times you ask for input but everyone does. There's also in the summary that you state you don't know how long the story will be put if people like it you'll continue. That doesn't really sound like a demand because it's just a statement. I'm sorry, maggiemay. Apparently someone wants to ruin things for everyone. I hope you get the answer you need.

I hope a solution comes about where everyone's happy. I've stalked your work for years maggie, I love you so hard! X3 You just emit awesomeness and masses of unexplainable emotions. <333 I wish you the best.

I am so excited that this story updated for the wait was quite long. I am happy that Jou is staying with Kaiba at least it seems like the long run especially considering everything Kaiba's trust issues. On on the other hand, they do both have baggage so it would be nice to see how they like each other overcome it and heal along the way. I do truly hope that something is done about Yugi and Atemu for you have made them out to be quite the villians. I look forward to the season two and hopefully the first chapter won't end with a cliffhanger like the end of season one did.

So good I'm officially addicted to your work. I'm a Maggieholic n.n

The entire chapter was riveting, but that last bit, where Jou watched the video... wow. If Seto was partially holding back on finding a way out because he thought he was a failure and that it was partially his fault, once he's got over the initial shock of finally finding out what Yami and Yugi did to him he'll be all business. Seto does not like being manipulated does he? He's going to be pissed.

I get the feeling that from what they saw on the video that Yugi wasn't happy about what he was doing? What Yami was making him do? Not that it absolves him of blame. Was Yugi the one that set the whole chain of events in motion by getting in contact with Yami in the first place?... Maybe I'm talking out of my arse or I missed something. I think I'm going to have to read the whole thing again to try and pick up on anything like that. :)

And who was that old man who was watching Jou's office door? It was only on reading the chapter a second time that I remembered about him, the end of the chapter having completely distracted me from him the first time. I'm sure we'll be seeing him again. And I'm also glad that Shizuka wouldn't give Mai the time of day.

Of course, with Gods involved all along the line, things will not be anything like easy and they are going to have to carefully watch their step. I'm definitely looking forward to the next chapter with bated breath.

Yeah, Christmas is early with presents from Maggiemay. I so am in love with this story, It's like an addiction of the sweetest kind.
Read you in the New year, and Merry HoHo.

Ooh boy, that oversight by Jou could have had things ending badly. Good job someone was there to kick him in the pants, so to speak.

I'm looking forward to seeing what happens with Jou and Seto now... especially once they review the video.

Shizuka's part was needed and it was not out of place in the story at all. I'm not even going to think about the ba and ka aspects, but I do like to read the conversations between you and Barbara on LD as that gives me an insight into all the bits I'm missing and more of an understanding of the story as a whole.

Another great chapter and I'll await the next with bated breath. :)