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for A Slave for Who?

by hachi-miitsu

schedule July 23, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Sooooo Jou is bitter because he thought Kaiba cared and Kaiba is bitter because he thinks Jou lied. ...comunication anyone? Beside, poor Jou, finding his sister is alive and thinking he abandoned her while he almost got himself killed trying to find her. Is he going to be crippled? Kaiba needs a spanking and not the kinky kind. ..Jou needs a hug. And chocolate. And tea and to be rapped up in a blanket. Mokuba I'll leave that to you.  

person Jess
schedule October 26, 2016 at 12:00 AM

More please!!!

person lasae abyss
schedule November 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Lovely! I do have a real weakness for slave fics, and this one is interesting. The BakuraxRyou scenes were both sweet and painful at the same time. Look forward to next chapter...
schedule September 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the few stories I look forward to reading when I see there are updates! I always can't wait for more once I finish a chapter! I'm sorry that you're sick. Get better with lots of liquids, rest, and a pad of paper and pen... you know... for writing down ideas if you get into a delirious sleep or something. I do it when I'm sick at least. :p Keep up the writing when you are all better. In the mean time, I hope my review puts a smile on your face. ^_^ Your story usually does that to me. I want to return the favor.

~ChibiRinni ^_^
person Andiusagi
schedule August 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I just finished reading the first chapter... and I think I love you. LOL. I wasn't entirely sure about what I was getting myself into after reading the story description and tags, but man am I glad I decided to give this a read!! I'm excited to see what's gonna happen in the next chapter, which I will go read now. :-)
person Andiusagi
schedule August 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Okay, just finished the rest of the chapters that are up. :-) I love your diction!! Is that a weird thing to comment on? Probably, but I'm gonna comment on it anyway because it deserves to be commended.
Anyway, I am totally enthralled by your story. <3 twincest, puppyshipping, AND a completely head-over-heels-for-Yugi Atem... It's like you know my soul. I'm really enjoying reading about Bakura and Ryou!~ Their back story is very interesting. I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter!

P.S. Olga is awesome. Words fail me...
schedule August 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I really like where this is going and can't wait for the next chapter! I LOVE PUPPYSHIPPING! I also like the relationship you have flowing with Atemu and Yugi. It's nice to have a story where Yugi isn't all drooling over Yami. It will be interesting when Yugi finally opens up to his Master. Now you got Ryou and Bakura twincest in the mix! Love, love, love it! Taboo or not, they make the best light and dark pair. Keep up the awesome work! I'll be waiting for updates! ^_^

~ChibiRinni ^_^
schedule July 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I wholeheartedly approve of Olga and naked Jounouchi, you go girl! And who is hanging out in the rain, mmhh?
But, sure, I'll stick around ;)
person I Hate Myself
schedule July 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
In the words of Kinomoto Sakura: HUUUEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
schedule July 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm ready to cheer for this story. Puppyshipping all the way, it's been some time since I've read something good. The Atem-Yugi sitiuation looks promising of entertainment as well!