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wow... poor yugi.... I hope that every thing ends up good for him... I need to know what happens next... please add the next chapter.... I am literally sitting on the edge of my seat with anticipation

This story is incredible! I really love it. Keep it going please, I'm at the edge of my seat.

Loving it. Hope to see what happens next.

he keeps this up all Atemu will have left is a souless doll if thats what he truly wants then he's well on his way but at what cost I wonder and will he even notice before its too late ah well keep up the great work gtg now JA NE

oh I think I know full well what this is all about huh and this is EXACTLY why Seth should have never open his big fat stupid mouth Yugi's light was the only thing keeping Atemu from doing this but now because of that thoughtless remark its costing them all severely he's just an innocent soul trying to do right by the man he loves and when he HEARS that he maybe causing trouble for Atemu he acts in what he feels is the best path though granted Atemu is taking this way out of proportion for it but what can you do there is something off with that power of his and its taking the beauty of what they have and twisting it horrendously it must be seen to or Yugi's beloved Atemu won't ever come back and the ONLY way for him to come back is to shower him with love everyone always said he was kind and noble WHAT THE FUCK is so wrong with him enjoying his time with the one that he loves and besides if you look at everything it wouldnt BE this bad if it wasnt for Seth if he didnt say that Yugi wouldnt have panic the way he did and run off resulting in the guards not being at their post around Bakura resulting in Atemu getting hurt things were just fine and even better if Yugi encourages Atemu to focus as much time on the kingdome as he does on Yugi NONE Of this would be happening huh keep up the great work gtg now JA NE

Poor Yuugi is so brainwashed by the voice. I wonder what took over Atemu, he is being so unfair and mean to Yuugi. It is probably Aknadin or Zorc.

For a chapter done without a beta, this was done perfectly well. No grammar mistakes to be seen. Anyways, I'm glad that Yuugi told Atemu his reason for leaving. Now I fear for poor Seth's life!!! I don't won't Seth to die!!! And I was hoping for some SethxJono too! Speaking of Jono....IS HE OKAY?!!! I mean Atemu has gone to the dark side so even if Yuugi came back on his own, I doubt that Atemu didn't take out his anger on Jono for helping Yuugi. And what about poor Ryou too?! Atemu had the dangerous part of the city burned to the ground! Is he even alive?! *Also had hopes for some tendershipping* Tee hee. Yes I'm a cliche yaoi shipper. Anyways thank you so much for the chapter! It's been so worth the wait!!! Can't wait for the next one!

P.S. If you do work on a SasuNaru I hope it's extra yummy!

I hope Atemu will be okay. He almost hurt Yuugi. I'm glad he stopped. Yugi needs to explain everything to him.

I like the chapter. I am sorry for Yuugi, I hope Ryou is ok

I love your story so far. Full of suspense. Please update soon.