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by Sparks

schedule November 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
GOD when is the NEXT update?! This story's fantastic, it deserves to be updated!
schedule October 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
even his mind fantasies effectively raping him was hot, bravo
person Lella
schedule October 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
wow, I wasn't expecting the story to take the turn it did! The plot advancing to his soul room was really something.
every new chapter has something good, but still, I think my favorite tidbit is in the first chapter- "carefully removing his sapphire cuff links and setting them aside" that little detail just creates so much imagery for the scene. And really, a well dressed man is quite attractive.
person Serenaj0
schedule October 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I hate you so much. Stop. Just stop. You're killing me. Please. No. More.
schedule October 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ah I have been dieing for this story to be update! I had such a happy dance moment when I saw it :) And that last chapter was glorious. I thought Joey would fight a bit harder, but even with thinking that, I still LOVED that last chapter. And I'm dieing to see if it will effect how the interactions go in the next chapter.
person Jei
schedule September 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I'm sooooo happy you updated! I was getting worried that you were going to abandon this fic! I like older sister role Mai is playing and how free she is about her sexuality and the way she lives. I hope Joey will take a page from her book (but not all of them since I only want Joey with Kaiba).

This chapter was so unusual yet extremely fascinating. I like how it's established that Joey and "the other Joey" are in fact the same person unlike Yami/Hikari relationship. The other Joey's plan to bring thei soul together was soooo HOTT. I love Bad-Seto more than Good-Seto but I can understand why Joey secretly yearns for those two sides of Seto as they both are insanely sexy in their own right. Joey getting a blowjob from himself was a mindfuck in the best way possible.

I'm so ready for Joey to stop being in denial for his desires for Kaiba and come to terms that he just has a high (and rather lewd) sex-drive! Nothing wrong with that. Lets just hope that in the up coming chapters The Real Seto can help show him that being a "slut" isn't so bad and can come with plenty of perks. Especially if your Seto Kaiba's whore. Lol.

Anyway great chapters as always and glad to know you haven't forgotten about us readers nor Joey and Seto!
schedule September 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh, it's good to see you back! :D

Poor Joey seems to be having a massive crisis, but at least he has Mai there for him. I will look forward to seeing what happens next.

(And is the Cube the same one that Mo Farah beat a few months back? Or is there more than one?)
schedule September 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I hope Joey's dad is fearful enough to not send Joey out to the streets. Seto has to be really careful around his genius brother. Sorry for not reviewing earlier. I lost the story.
schedule September 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Seto is falling hard and is really in denial. I hope he gets Joey out of that place soon.
schedule September 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Joey is really conflicted. I hope Mai helped. I don't think Yugi is as naive or innocent as Joey thinks.