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person dragonlady222
schedule December 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Poor Joey. I really hope he gets a chance to talk to Yami. His slut-side needs to be locked up. His father has totally destroyed his self esteem He needs his friends to help him. Seto needs to let his feeling out and treat Joey with a little more respect. It would help if he would actually listen and hear what Joey said to him. He was the first and only one, Joey is not a whore.
person Valaris
schedule December 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm so happy you updated!! I have been rereading these updated chapters over and over again. This story is a delightful read. You are so awesome in how to describe each character. I hope Joey does merge with Other Joey in a way that he is still himself and can fully understand that loving sex isn't a bad thing, and I hope Seto will care for Joey enough for Joey to see that he is loved. Hopefully Yami and Yugi don't get the wrong idea about things though but I can hope that the gang will accept Seto and Joey being lovers. Update please!!!!!!
schedule December 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh this story gets more twisted and wonderful with each chapter :) I wonder what will be happening with that moose now ;) I hope the juices start flowing again!
person tiarakc
schedule November 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
There are not enough words to describe how much I am in love with this story and I am so glad that you updated! and what a wonderful update it was. You descriptions totally enthrall me and just simple leave me wanting more. Such an interesting story. Can't wait to read more, luv. :)
schedule November 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Glorious updates ^.^ But I'm reallllyy wondering how Joey is going to feel when he comes back to himself after that romp!
person rukianeechan
schedule November 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
What can i do for you to update faster? what can I do? I'll do anything!! I checked the website and when i see you updated imminently started dancing around the room! and you didn't disappoint.. My god u should think about doing this for living I'll buy your stories. Ah...the last chapter, when Seto said: if anyone touches you I'll kill them?... ah... I fell off my chair!!! Does he even have any idea what is he feeling> How wrong is he when he thinks sex is about power. Does he have any idea how much is he getting sucked into this? and Joey? my god does Joey have any idea how much he is losing himself in all this? Does their head made out of cheese?
Please please please update more..if I review once a day and just call u awesome would u plz update sooner? Ah, I'll be reading these 2 last chapter 800 times until You update again!
person dragonlady222
schedule November 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Poor Joey, his other is trying to take him over completely which would be a disaster for everyone. I hope Yami does get to talk to Joey. He can probably help.
person dragonlady222
schedule November 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
They, the three of them, Joey's other, Seto and his father are slowly killing him and breaking down his self-esteem. I hope his friends can help him before he is completely lost.
schedule November 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
that was hot as usual, but I hope regular Joey doesn't completely disappear. I do like him.
person bloodysword99
schedule November 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
holy fuck! this totally awesome!! emotion, sex, denial, pressure, depression, pity, anger, greed, lust and LOVE!!!!!! :3 i love it!!!!!!