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Poor Joey really needs to talk to Yami. Seto is an ass.

I wish Seto would call Joey by name more often instead of slut and whore. He is still demeaning him. He should realize by now that his father did this without his consent.

I hope they can help before Joey is lost completely. He needs to get rid of the other him and Dark Seto. They are completely killing his spirit.

I'm glad Seto is being nicer. I hope they can still be saved and be a couple.

OMG I keep re-reading this story, and like Joey-I can't get enough of it. Is it bad that I want Seto's fantasy of fucking Joey infront if his friends, to come true? Maybe when a concerned Yugi/Yami show up, Seto can give them a demonstration of how much, Joey likes it ;) more please!! This story makes my brain melt!!!

I'm glad that Joey and Seto decided that they should stay together. That was half the battle.

I'm so glad you're continuing this story!! It's one of my favorites - I love your portrayal of Seto and Joey: the constant push-pull; the trash-talking; their quiet, disconcerting moments of understanding and affection; the hot, hot sex...those idiots don't know they're in love, sigh. Also gotta give props to Mai and Cynthia!

Heh, Mar and I are friends IRL and reading this together - I disagree with her on the whole public sex thing. I think the fantasy crosses the line a bit too much for them to ever have a functioning, healthy relationship lol. While I think The Mutt would enjoy it, I think it would be too humiliating for Joey, and too much of a imbalance of power/dominance. But I can't wait to read what you have in store (perhaps a kiss!?)!!

Whoo! You're back! And bearing such lovely presents, mainly porn. I have nothing more to add to this chapter other than: well, that escalated quickly. I hope Joey can find a nice happy medium with his normal self and his lust self. Also, Kaiba better take real good care of him. I look forward to their new living arrangements!

^^ i love this story i was really happy to see it was updated ^^ plz update soon i wana see what will happen with them next ^^

OMG...omg...out of all the chapters, just when I believe that it's finally "hotter than I can handle", you just outdo yourself. God, this chapter. So many kink buttons hot. And I LOVE how desperate Seto had become for Joey. They are just a pile of guuuuuuuuh....please write more!!!!!!