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Oh wow! I haven't checked on this story in a whole and I'm pleasantly surprised that you've updated...and a lot too! I'm glad to see the plot is moving forward more. While of course I love Seto and Jou having hot 'n steamy smex, it's good to see some of the struggles Seto is going through in coping and understanding his feelings since the majority of the story has been focused on Jou overcoming his inner sexual inhabitions. Anyway, looking forward to more updates and glad to see you got your grove back! We missed you! :)

OMG!!! MORE CHAPTERS!! YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS! I was totally right about the call being in regards to Joey's dad. I feel bad for Yugi, but I don't blame Seto either. I wouldn't want people poking around my relationship JUST as it's developing, as well as it being attached to some sketchy aspects, that neither he or Joey want exposed. I hope that Yugi understands and that Joey comes around to talk to him on better terms. Also, Mokuba is just too damn cute for words. I can't wait to see how Joey and Seto are going to transition their relationship. I also can't wait to see what's in that bag! More pleaaase!

Seto is realizing he still believes in love. That was a lesson not learned well. That's a good thing. I'm glad he is. Gozaburo was an evil, depressed man and took all his anger out on Seto.

Poor Joey is still confused. His other self and the two other Seto's are not helping him. I wonder who is calling for him. Either his sister or Mokuba or possibly a young Seto Kaiba.

Joey's dad is becoming a problem. He better watch his back if he pushes too far. I hope Seto can make him back off.

Poor Yugi really does only want to help. Seto was a little harsh but that is Seto. Joey was upset and angry and lashed out at YUgi. I hope they make up Yugi needs him and Joey needs Yugi even if right now he doesn't think so. Yugi just said a little too much.

Awwwwwww i neeeeeed mooooooooore!!! O.O plz update reli reli soon ^^

More story yay! Love the plotty chapters; I had been wondering if Gozaburo had messed up Seto in the love-arena since Seto's always been like "sex = domination" . Glad to see the the romance element into this :) can I guess that the phone call is from Joey's Dad on the matter if getting more money for his son's usage? Please write more soon!

4 chapters in one weekend!? Be still my beating heart!! Loved the interlude chapter - the glimpse of how Seto got to be the way he is, and how his experiences with Joey are slowly starting to put a crack in that abuse. I'm liking the way you're using the soul room idea in this fic - I wonder if Good!Seto will be a key in helping/allowing Joey to become okay with his sexuality and feelings for Seto. Also LOVED Mokuba's reaction to Joey - the boy is too cute, and just how I expected him to react. I had a feeling the phone call had to do with Joey's dad, and poor Yugi and his good intentions! I hope it doesn't affect their friendship too much! All in all, love all around for the developments - thanks for treating us to lots of updates!!

Oh. My. God. Thank you for this lovely update! I've been waiting for it and you didn't disappoint. So hot! They funny bits in between were awsome, too, but the porn! Omg, the porn!! I'm awed. Love it.