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Phew! Just kidding just jumping too conclusion! :)

I love it! I love how you keep them in character, makes it so much more enjoyable :D i'm looking forward to your next update! ^^

I have been out of fanfiction for 6 years, every once in a while trying to make a comeback but failing. However, this story has me completely hooked.
I'm glad to be back. Thank you. Keep up the hot sex. Can't wait for the juicy kiss.

Hahaha what a clever little brother ;) He is a Kiba indeed! And what a great update. I can't wait to see what happens next <3

I totally cooed at Joey telling Seto he had been a virgin before that one fateful night. *w* I love it! Love this story so much, haha! xD Keep going!

I love this story. I am glad I can review again. Seto is falling for Joey, hard. He needs to take Joey hime with him and get him out of that hellhole.

I truly love this story you have concocted. I'm at the edge of my seat every time, and screaming and gasping at every turn of events. You my dear have a gift and I'm glad you're sharing it with mere mortals such as myself. I constantly wait for you updates (I check everyday) x3 You are very inspiring with how descriptive you are and is actually tempting me to write my own fanfic but I don't I'll be as good as you. Keep up the good work and keep it coming with those updates. -bribes with cookies-

[Warning Long Review Ahead]

Before I begin I just want to let you know that for this being your first yugioh fanfic, you are doing an amazing job so far. I've been reading Yugioh fanfiction for over 8 years now so I've turned into a bit of a fanfic snob as time continues to pass. Unfortunately, the amount of good/decent fanfics for this fandom has waned and I was beginning to lose hope (especially with puppyshipping). That is, until I stumbled upon your fic on here. To be honest, I didn't expect much since the summary sounds very vague and elementary, but I was pleasantly surprised at how well written this story is. You manage to keep Seto and Joey in character while adding a sprinkle of humor here and there to balance everything out.

And don't let me started on the sex scenes. They're so delicious and smutty to the point I can also taste them. I love the inner struggle Joey is having with his "alter ego". I'm hoping will get to see Seto's inner struggles too, when he realizes that he wants the mutt for more than just hot, mind blowing sex (at least I hope he does anyway).

Also, major kudos for incorporating Kanye West's Devil in a New Dress. Usually, I'm not a big fan of music in fanfiction (even if it's just the name mentioned and not any of the actual lyrics), but I'm actually a huge Kanye fan and I adore that song. I even went back and reread this chapter with the song playing in the background on my computer. Yes, I'm that weird and perverted. Oh, and for some reason I hope we can see maybe some crossdressing, costumes, or roleplay in the future? I think Seto would thoroughly enjoy making Joey's dog dream/fantasy come to life or even make him wear some sexy lingerie. Just a thought.

I've frequent this website a lot over the years and I've never bothered to sign up/in to leave a review once they added the rule....until now that is. So feel honored that I did all this work just to tell you how awesome you are (but no seriously, you really are awesome). I'm eagerly looking forward to knew chapters and what is in store for those two.

Dear Lord, I thought this story was gunna have some serious first timer problems, but you've avoided all of them. To say it simply, I love this story. The characters are believable and their emotions flow naturally. The "duo" personality you gave Joey is very interesting. I really like Cynthia and how you've portrayed Mai. And, of course, the sex is totally hot. I am definitely keeping an eye on this story. I can't wait to see what happens with Mokuba!! Please keep up the great work!

Another very hot chapter, yay! :D That last part with Seto licking him clean "§$%&/ I can't even, omg! You render me speechless here! Dx