rate_review Reviews

I laughed... and laughed... and kept getting looked at funny by my fiance! The interactions with all the characters (especially Mai and Joey) felt as though you had pulled the lines from the actual show. In other words, everyone was well in character, the story flowed, and I want MORE! I was unsure about the story at first for obvious reasons (Joey being a prostitute), but I decided to read it anyway and I am GLAD I did!

It is so HARD to find a GOOD story anymore! Lately I keep finding half-assed stories, thrown together like some high school student's essay! "And they kissed and hugged and Kaiba whispered, 'I love you.' And Joey melted against him and cried, 'I love you too Seto!' And they lived happily ever after!" Yeah, not the kind of story I get in the mood to read. Those kinds of stories are a dime a dozen, but like what Kaiba paid, your story is definitely a one of a kind and RICH story!

Now that I have properly stroked your ego... WHEN IS THE NEXT UPDATE? MUST READ MORE! PLEASE POST MORE! **On knees begging** I didn't want to stop reading it and when I realized I had read the last of the posted chapters I said a few words aloud that had my fiance looking at me again. UPDATE SOON PLEASE!

<3 ChibiRinni ^_^

Don't worry, I think this chapter was great and as far as I'm concerned you didn't eff it up. :P It was interesting to see Joey's soul room, his other self and how he is still pretty much in denial over what he really wants.

I'm seriously looking forward to seeing what happens next. :D

Oooh, I've been waiting for the new chapter! :3 I understand how you would take a long time to write this, but I think it turned out nicely. I was a bit surprised you'd give Jou a soul room, but the way you portrayed it fit very well. :D Also liked the start, that memory. But I want morrre~ xD

omigawd im so happy! i was so sad i thought you gave up on this story im so happy you didnt!

Love it!

Ah interesting chapter. I've honestly never given any thought to one of the more normal character's in yu-gi-oh having a soul room. I'm rather enjoying it now that I've read about it though. Helped to explain his actions some. I'm really looking forward to seeing how this will play out ;)

Poor Seto dies nit yet realise that he is falling in love with him.

Poor Joey. His double is kind of like Yami is in season zero but he is being honest with him. Joey just needs to try and integrate the two hims in a more acceptable way. He needs to accept his sexuality before he can do that.

Hi! I really enjoyed your story not only that it was kinda of a shock to see my name in a fanfic for once lol. My first name is Cynthia and my last name is Lopez lol. But i did enjoy it! Keep writting :)

*twitch*twitch* I just gave Kaiba head...I'm not sure how I feel about that...