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by Sparks

schedule July 14, 2017 at 12:00 AM

It looks like this story hasn't been updated for a while. This makes me sad, because it is literally the best story I have read since browsing for Yu-Gi-Oh fanfiction. If you are still active in this account, and still able to get these messages, your readers really need you to continue the story and finish it. It is so good. I'm hooked and I need more!

schedule February 20, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I recently finished reading RTO and what you have is amazing. It's not often that I find a fanfic that is so well thought out and written that I can't put it down. I do wish that you would continue; all though, looking at when your last update was I know that's most likely not going to happen, but that doesn't stop one from hoping.

 

Good luck with your writing.

person jakuro
schedule November 19, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Hot and well written and finely executed. I feel like they're in love and won't admit it to themselves or eachother <3 Who knows!

person Raen
schedule September 26, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Oh COME ON!!! You cannot leave it like this, I'm on the edge of my seat here! What happens next, for the love of all that is unholy tell me!!

person talyak
schedule September 21, 2016 at 12:00 AM

hehe more more more!

person Ishtani
schedule June 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I just re-read this story and I love it! I would love to see it finished. I myself took years to finish one of my stories and I remember the lack of motivation. I hope you can find the inspiration!
person Brp
schedule November 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Will this Eva be updated?
person Marie
schedule June 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Please, please finish this awesome, incredible, so hot puppyshipping fic. I check everyday for a miracle.
person Pupshipadip
schedule February 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Still holding out for an update! This is fantastic smut!!
person anonusr
schedule January 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I still swing by to this site every so often to check if you've updated this - I really love this story, and I hope you continue it sometime.