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for A Kiss Before He Leaves

by GudenMulle

schedule July 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Really, really good, please continue!
person just around the corner
schedule May 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is really good!! Please write more! Kaiba obviously needs to learn to prioritize more and I'm really looking forward to seeing how you play out Kaiba's part in the story as he reacts to Jou's emotions. Definitely longer story is better!!!!!~~!!
person the_lost_ogg
schedule May 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I very much like how this turned out. Again, love the tactile details. But... I must confess that dabbles always feel a bit like acorns that have been plucked from the ground and set in a dark desk drawer. They're nifty, but they really want to grow into an oak tree. Please?!?!
person yukiko angel
schedule May 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
loved it
person lo
schedule May 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great drama, that was wonderfully intense and heart breaking. Good job.