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June 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Poor Yuugi no one will really answer his questions. Tha new girl has her own agenda. It isprobably to either kill the pharaoh or have his heir.
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June 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Yugi wold never say aything. He is too innocent for all this. I hope Seth seals the deal soon so Yugi can stay.
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June 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Poor Yugi. At least, he is safe. I hope they can find a way to be free.
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May 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh Yuigi father is such a bad guy^^I really don't like him!!!! And finally he is claimed^^ I wonder if there will be a nice threesome between the pharaoh seth and yugi at some time? Maby the pharaoh can learn to love yugi too!!! that would really be nice ^^ See you again soon!!!!
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May 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This has a really good story line...great character interaction..may I help you a bit? Your spelling is quite good..just a little help okay? Yugi was bought (not brought which in a sentence would be Yugi brought a present to Marik's party) from a slave master..
I will sell you this slave for a good price...There is a good sale at the slave market today...
Just a couple of hints...hope you do not mind...otherwise, this story is quite good...catti
I will sell you this slave for a good price...There is a good sale at the slave market today...
Just a couple of hints...hope you do not mind...otherwise, this story is quite good...catti
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May 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
damn..it gets better with every chapter..hope you keep it up...hate to see good stories never conclude..catti
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May 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh Atem was so mean in the end!!!I really hope he will understand that yugi wants to help them both!!!! See you again!!!!
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May 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh what a sweet story!!! I really like it!!! I hope to see more of this soon!!!!
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May 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Well so far this story is pretty damn enjoyable :) Nice long chapters, good plot, cute human interaction and best of all lemony goodness lol. :) I'm looking forward to more!
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May 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I am glad that Seth is being gentle with him. Yugi needs to learn to trust but he has been so harshly treated it is hard for him. I hope he can learn. They are both being very kind to him.