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for Egyptain Slave

by Reist

person Keara
schedule September 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
huh great yes he may still retain his innocence but that will not erase his fear or his feelings of worthlessness at the rate this is going that boy will remove himself from your side and sentence himself to a life of misery if he feels in anyways that he's little more then trouble huh I swear to god how heartless people can be is astonishing its like no life values anything unless there gold and power backing it up its nothing short then the most bastardizing thing I will EVER see and it is a thousand times more disgusting then how they view Yugi simply because he's a slave he maybe a slave but his innocence selflessness compassionate personality and looks make him a thousand times more valuable then the Pharaoh's wealth combined hmph fools you will see this for yourself one way or another keep up the great work gtg now JA NE
schedule August 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Poor Yugi is so scared and hurt. I hope he can learn to trust them again. I'm glad they are taking care of him and keeping him safe.
person Smint45
schedule August 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
That was great^* Hope to hear more from you soon!!!!
person Keara
schedule August 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Huh is this really how humans see each other by their status if so they have immeasurable amounts to learn huh poor yugi hell poor Atem and Seth at least they see his value but they are trapped by rules that govern no one other the. History huh keep up the great work grg now ja ne
schedule July 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Omigosh, what's gonna happen next??? *SHALL AWAIT UPDATES*
schedule July 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I was looking for something to read and I can say I am so happy I found such a great story to read. Love the ancient Egypt time with Yugi and with the love story that is between the three of them (Seth, Yami and Yugi). Great writing and I can't wait for more.
person smint45
schedule July 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh my poor yugi!!! But he had it comming!!!! I mean with all the disobeying he does!!!! Hope that the pharao will not be angry at him when he comes to his chamber!!! Hear from you again soon!!!
schedule July 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I hope Atemu explains why he had to punish Yugi. He doesn't really ahve to but it would be nice. It is too bad he can't free the slaves.
person Keara
schedule July 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Keep up the great work gtg now ja ne
person smint45
schedule June 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh this love triangel is getting more and more complicated!!! See you again!!!