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awesome story.... need to know what happens next... please update

Yuugi is so strong but still so firghtened. I'm glad this time they explained to him and left it to his choice. Too bad it will have to end.

well least Yugi will get to enjoy himself and FUCK YOU AKUNADIN you don't know jack fucking shit if you think for a SOLITARY moment having YOUR son on the throne will make it seem like YOUR in control think again you idiot Seth is bound only to his Pharaoh he will rule as his Pharaoh wants him to rule you will lose and see the folly in your mistakes it will all be for naught for you keep up the great work gtg now JA NE

I get the feeling from this that neither of you may even need to worry for it will be Yugi who shines once again and protects you both huh such is the ways of fate there will be greedy selfish black souls who only see their own glory and fail to acknowledge the true power that lies within us all but when that power is allowed to shine by their owners it will leave you UTTERLY speechless keep up the great work gtg now JA NE and I'd love to see this one shot of yours I never heard of this pairing either only the other version with Seth Seto and Yami/Atem

Poor Atem. I hope Isis is worng and they all will survive. I would love to read your one-shot.

huh poor Yugi and Seth and dam that Akunadin to hell he's out to make everyones life pure hell with his treachery it can't be allowed greedy bastard thats all he is greedy and selfish he'd run Egypt into the ground and slaughter any he saw as useless and annoying but Seth thats no reason to take it out on Yugi its not his fault he's done absolutely nothing but the best he can as a slave given it was forced upon him by his own flesh and blood if you turn on him now he will have no where to go no one to turn to at least you sill have your cousin and lover who does he have and he's already troubled over his odd feelings for the pharaoh when his loyalty should only be to you huh keep up the great work gtg now JA NE

Seth is very conflicted. I hope he can get away from aknedon and be safe.

UGH for GOD sakes how many times does it take for them to GET IT HE WAS NEVER TRAINED HIS FATHER WANTS HIM TORTURED BEATEN DOWN BROKEN SENT TO HELL OVER AND OVER AND OVER AGAIN THAT BOY HAS NO CHOICE BUT TO SUFFER FOR HIS FATHERS CRUELTY STOP TAKING IT OUT ON HIM *pants* seriously he's getting it SLOWLY but he can't help himself its not like any of you fools would react differently not ALL OF US can keep our emotions behind walls of steel but if you keep it up I can assure you HE WILL HAVE A WALL UP no more smiles no more innocence no NOTHING you will destroy the one few lights left in this world and there will be NO bringing it back GOD DAMIT I AM SO TIRED OF THIS its not right how little people value a life its disgusting seriously what more do you WANT from the boy for if you wanted to remove him all you had to do was SAY SO and Hetaai BACK THE FUCK OFF RIGHT NOW your making it worse right now he's the safest he can be with Seth he's no safer out there in the world with an abusive cold father waiting to resell him to ensure he suffers further if you were to keep your promise to his mother then seriously where were you when he was sold why didnt you save him then back when it was needed now your just making things worse for that boy leave him alone before YOU get him killed huh well very passionate update there huh I seriously hope SOMEONE wakes these idiots up before all humane feelings left are destroyed along with that boy he will have NOTHING left thanks to this and the cruelty that surounds him I swear its like they hate his innocence and such if you hate him that much then just end his life and be done with it geeze but you can't do it can you so instead you just want to prolong his torment as I said you all are DISGUSTING (but not you author your chars)

Poor Yugi is attracted to Seto and Atem. I hope, they ease his fears even if just a little.

I wish they would explain things to Yugi. He is so very confused by everything. He can feel the love between the two and fears he is in the way.