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by darkdragonwriter

person Anise
schedule April 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
*fans self* My god these two were hot and they hadn't even gotten to the actual sex but in all honesty I don't think Mai could be anything but sexy ;) Also I liked that bit of playfulness between the two of them, it's subtle but still there even during something so intimate. It's a great oneshot, how could you not love a guy who so obviously adores his girl :)
schedule April 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Aaand you did it again, prove the world you are the master of your craft. I don't know how you do this - making everything so explicit without getting into factual and anatomical detail. It's amazing how naturally we got in the groove, without any bit (or barely) of context or background for those two. You made both of them gorgeous inside and out, I love you for that :3